Creative artist should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas in words pictures music or film in whichever way they wish There should be no government restrictions on what they do To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option

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Creative artist should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option?

Creativity is a one form if art where an artist can express his thoughts in various forms. As the famous proverb quotes, “Imagination is more important than knowledge ”. We can clearly observe that an creative artist use imagination aptly in whichever art they pursue. May be in any filed like art, music, literature, films, dance, food (recipes) etc. Though the fields are different imagination, creation and a clear vision of what is required for future is measured before, the actual art is presented to us.

Creative artist should always be given the liberty and freedom to express their own ideas (words, pictures, music or films) in whichever filed they wish to. Many fields like art, music, literature, films, dramas, food, media i.e. print media, journalism etc. Here we can see each flied has creativity. Art is expressed in drawing, painting, sculpture, wall. Music in various forms like rock, pop, hip-hop, classical, instrumental. Literatures in Asian, Medieval and Modern. Films like romantic, comedy, thriller, classical, social. Now-a days even food recipes are best example of creativity. Many innovative cuisines are broadcasted on television.

Creative artist from any flied should be given freedom to experes their own ideas. The freedom should be used in right ways. Here, also necessity is there to express ideas in liberal means. Misuse of freedom of expression should be avoided as it many hurt religious, cultural, social, socio-political feelings of a person or party and can spoil their status in society.

Government helps, encourages, supports the creative artists and flied. Liberty is given so that they could flourish the cultural, social heritage of country, community. In many countries government support creativity for example it gives funds for a film in particular language so that the producers directors artist can present society with best form of art. When government do not put any restriction possibility of misuse is high. E.g. an artist painted a naked picture of hindu goddess, due to which religious, socio-political feelings were hurt & caused a chaos in country .

I do agree with the statement that creative artist should be given freedom by Government. But, the artist should have a rational thinking, by taking into consideration the boundaries of expression and scope of acceptance world wide.

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Average: 7.2 (30 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., if, may, so, for example, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35752688172 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85454951182 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594086021505 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7508877101 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.72 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.88 23.4991977007 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.24 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382011454864 0.243740707755 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096779947769 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12599474388 0.0758088955206 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211488118219 0.150359130593 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686470668364 0.0667264976115 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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