Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.
The statement above establishes a dilemma often seen in the political scene-should decision be made based on an idiosyncratic judgement or should it represent the view of the people. This essay agrees with the latter position.
First of all, if a representative is to limit the amount of blame from a decision the safest action is to part with a census and follow the ordered directive. It may not be the case that a ruler share the public opinion, nevertheless, if the people request officials to commit to a course of actions unquestionably it will reduce the amount of liability and fault to be accountable for. In the case of immigration laws, Barack Obama allowed over 100 000 Syrian refugees in the USA. From surveys of public opinions, the majority of the population disagree with the decision and its abysmal consequences, such as terrorist attack from those refugees, was blamed on the former president due to his poor judgement in allowing them to cross border and live in the USA. Some people claims it may have tarnished the reputation of Hilary Clinton, who hold similar position and believes.
Second, when political elections take place, whether at the federal, state or local level, the ultimate goal is the vote of representatives embracing the dogma of their respective communities. In and of itself, it means that voters look for a political figure, who embody their individual believes and will advocate in favor of them. As a result, if a state stand in majority in favor of abortion, the governor should be holding that position during any federal election as the seat that was offered to him in the congress was for sole purpose to represent the view of the state majority.
Nevertheless, political figures are elected based on a certain level of skills and experiences recognize by the voters, who hold certain level of a trust of their expertise and vision. When the BP oil spills occurred in the Gulf of Mexico, population look out to the government officials for course of action to remediate to the noxious toxic fuels that polluted the water and destroyed marine life. This shows that the society believed those officials had previous experiences and could make an educated decision on how to handle this situation.
To conclude, to avoid taking the blame when a situation does not result as expected, government official liability decrease if they represented the public desire in expense of their own, which is the essence of an elected representative. However, in each official there is an expert in the field, who ought to use judgment, common sense and experience to handle a situation to its best.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, so, as for, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2201.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 444.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95720720721 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81975056041 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538288288288 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 6.0 0.740449438202 810% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5071450231 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.733333333 118.986275619 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145670197199 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042922376552 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395311611709 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775485455418 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376001859636 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 100.480337079 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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