Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
The author in the above issue suggest that the government must give the financial support to the major cities in order to progress. I completely agree with that of the author. There are many reason for my acceptance with the author view. I will try to elaborate it in above paragraph.
First of all, the author says that in order to lead to the progress, government must give the financial support. There are many reason which will prompt my approval. As the progress of the nation lies in the progress of the individual. So the progress of the individual is necessary which can be obtain by giving financial support to the one who needs. Nation can also reach to epic with the progress of the individual’s. Thus there seems no loop from approval of the author.
Secondly, Education is one of the basic necessities of the person. There are various individuals in the city who have interest in the studies but due to the financial problem are unable to achieve it. So financial aid must be provided to such needy person for the welfare of the individual as well as that of the nation. Thus, providing financial aid is one of best investment to be done which can yield efficient in the future. One of the main reason for our nation lacking behind the other nation is poverty which can be overcome by providing financial support. Overall development of an individual can also be achieve by providing financial support.
On conclusion, to wrap my discussion over this issue. I would like bulk all above evidence as a whole. There seems no ray for the disagreement with the author’s view. As the progress of the nation is with development of the individual. Thus progress can be achieved by providing financial support.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
...gree with that of the author. There are many reason for my acceptance with the author view....
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Line 2, column 123, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
...t give the financial support. There are many reason which will prompt my approval. As the p...
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Line 2, column 166, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y reason which will prompt my approval. As the progress of the nation lies in the ...
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Line 2, column 427, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... the progress of the individual's. Thus there seems no loop from approval of th...
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Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...hor. Secondly, Education is one of the basic necessities of the person. There are various indivi...
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Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
...n. Thus, providing financial aid is one of best investment to be done which can yield e...
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Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sagreement with the author's view. As the progress of the nation is with deve...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'as well as', 'first of all', 'as well as that']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.222222222222 0.240241500013 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.144144144144 0.157235817809 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0810810810811 0.0880659088768 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.039039039039 0.0497285424764 79% => OK
Pronouns: 0.027027027027 0.0444667217837 61% => OK
Prepositions: 0.15015015015 0.12292977631 122% => OK
Participles: 0.033033033033 0.0406280797675 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76388615299 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.036036036036 0.030933414821 116% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.132132132132 0.0997080785238 133% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.036036036036 0.0249443105267 144% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.018018018018 0.0148568991511 121% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1726.0 2732.02544248 63% => OK
No of words: 300.0 452.878318584 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75333333333 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.58838876751 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.316666666667 0.366273622748 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246666666667 0.280924506359 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19 0.200843997647 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136666666667 0.132149295362 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76388615299 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 219.290929204 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443333333333 0.48968727796 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 42.7833795756 55.4138127331 77% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.380412469 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.361396756 59.4972553346 54% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3 141.124799967 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 23.380412469 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.55 0.674092028746 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 39.6666666667 51.4728631049 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.92857142857 1.64882698954 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288844633138 0.391690518653 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.135086471825 0.123202303941 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.113546001846 0.077325440228 147% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.530736921192 0.547984918172 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.193668431458 0.149214159877 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12518009555 0.161403998019 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1066121969 0.0892212321368 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.604284073408 0.385218514788 157% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0751400924562 0.0692045440612 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23571509607 0.275328986314 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775876935151 0.0653680567796 119% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.