Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
This topic raises a very controversial issue of whether, the Governments should offer college and university education free to all the students or not. Indisputably, there are many students who are not financially capable for paying the high amount of University fees. Thus, for the betterment of these students some sort of provision must be provided by the Government. But, giving education free to all the students is not the solution to the above mentioned issue. Therefore, I would disagree with the author and would argue that the College and University Education should not be free of cost.
Firstly, there are instances where this policy will be harmful. To illustrate this, let us take an example of student who wants an admission in the college. Now, as it is free of cost he would register himself in many of the Universities and then after the process select one of them. Thus, would hinder the candidature for some other student. Also, some students who will appear for some commerce related seat would enroll themselves for the science field as it is free. Thus, hinder someone who only might appear for science seat.
Secondly, to run the administration department of the college there are funds required. This funds generally come from the fees of the students. But, if the fees are rescinded than this funds will have to come from some other source which might affect the proper functioning of the College and University. Also, there are salaries that are to be paid to the staff members from peon to the Principal. Hence, this kind of step will surely occulde the progress of the society as a whole.
Admittedly, there must be some abridgement in the fees structure which will help society to grow. Decrement in the fees upto the viable amount is appreciable. There are students which will take this oppurtunity and have potential to show extrapolating growth in the academic field. Also, some sort of the scholarships might help students like sports scholarship, etc.
To sum up, the contention of the author that the education in College and University must be free of cost to all the students is indefensible. It is contrary to the overwhelming evidence that the decrement in the fees might be profitable. But, complete annul will not adhere towards the betterment of the Nation. Hence, the optimum amount of the fees in the Universities and Colleges is necessary. As far as some measurements are taken, or some cases are involved this conclusion holds credit.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ts. But, if the fees are rescinded than this funds will have to come from some other...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'kind of', 'sort of', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.232258064516 0.240241500013 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.137634408602 0.157235817809 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0602150537634 0.0880659088768 68% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0516129032258 0.0497285424764 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0193548387097 0.0444667217837 44% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109677419355 0.12292977631 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0193548387097 0.0406280797675 48% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.72935788668 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0301075268817 0.030933414821 97% => OK
Particles: 0.00215053763441 0.0016655270985 129% => OK
Determiners: 0.139784946237 0.0997080785238 140% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0451612903226 0.0249443105267 181% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0193548387097 0.0148568991511 130% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2484.0 2732.02544248 91% => OK
No of words: 418.0 452.878318584 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94258373206 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.315789473684 0.366273622748 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241626794258 0.280924506359 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.188995215311 0.200843997647 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.126794258373 0.132149295362 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72935788668 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 219.290929204 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461722488038 0.48968727796 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.0941257225 55.4138127331 90% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6194690265 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.72 23.380412469 72% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9850720199 59.4972553346 49% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.36 141.124799967 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.72 23.380412469 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.674092028746 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 40.8826794258 51.4728631049 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.73195876289 1.64882698954 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43287082292 0.391690518653 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.129680239381 0.123202303941 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.106307697074 0.077325440228 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.55150085083 0.547984918172 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145870421692 0.149214159877 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180961180585 0.161403998019 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992026839149 0.0892212321368 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.436601739887 0.385218514788 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0641248998268 0.0692045440612 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317506795601 0.275328986314 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668995886719 0.0653680567796 102% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88274336283 246% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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