The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Machines can never take over the human mind, due to the fact that machine is utilized for purposes like the tool. Although there are some evidences oppose the statement, it is a sound and plausible for me since the differences between human and machine are distinguishable and the restriction of the machine.
On the one hand,think is what we, as a human being, regarded as the difference between human and machine. That is to say, without cognition, machines cannot be superior to people. Due to the fact that human mind is continuously progressing. Once when there is a setback or an obstacle that a human is facing. Failing for the first time cannot be evitable. While one is keep failing, the mind, or cognition, is growing and adapting the difficulty. Eventually, he or she will success, due to the mind that a human will go through when hee or she is trying to solve the problem.
Other may argue that there are evidences show that machine does have the ability to overcome the obstacle and beat the human to the core. Take the go game, an ancient Chinese board game, for example. Google has invented a go game machine that overwhelms the world go game champion and won the competition. However, no matter how adept the machine, or computer, it is created by human. That is to say, the human can still harness it and to achieve a higher goal. The artificial intelligence is a device that may have the ability to think or foresee, but that merely depends on the capacity of its memory, not its intelligence.
Furthermore, the artificial intelligence is limited to power, which is electricity. A human can decide when or where to use it. Thus, the determination of using the artificial intelligence of a human makes the utilization of the artificial intelligence. This is also an evidence that indicates that artificial intelligence is merely a tool instead of a mean to outstrip human cognition. Robots, nowadays, divulges many limitations that the artificial is encountered. The stability of the power supply, or the external elements that affect the robot itself. Elements like humidity or temperature will, certainly, affect durability or effectiveness of a machine. Because the damp will erode the metal and causes malfunction. Therefore, a machine is used by human as a tool that meets in a few particular area.
In sum, while the ability that the machine can think or even predict is incredible, it will be too assertive to say that human will be outstripped by it. Since the limitation does exist for the machine and, furthermore the uniqueness of the human being cannot easily be circumvented by a machine which intelligence depends on its memory capacity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , think
...ction of the machine. On the one hand,think is what we, as a human being, regarded ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'that is to say']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.211240310078 0.240241500013 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.162790697674 0.157235817809 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0697674418605 0.0880659088768 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0445736434109 0.0497285424764 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0290697674419 0.0444667217837 65% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0968992248062 0.12292977631 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0329457364341 0.0406280797675 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.92738486999 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0290697674419 0.030933414821 94% => OK
Particles: 0.00193798449612 0.0016655270985 116% => OK
Determiners: 0.135658914729 0.0997080785238 136% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0290697674419 0.0249443105267 117% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0251937984496 0.0148568991511 170% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2683.0 2732.02544248 98% => OK
No of words: 454.0 452.878318584 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90969162996 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.314977973568 0.366273622748 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.270925110132 0.280924506359 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.193832599119 0.200843997647 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125550660793 0.132149295362 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92738486999 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 219.290929204 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466960352423 0.48968727796 95% => OK
Word variations: 52.1529969814 55.4138127331 94% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6194690265 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.4615384615 23.380412469 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8343456784 59.4972553346 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.192307692 141.124799967 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 23.380412469 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.538461538462 0.674092028746 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 44.5540494748 51.4728631049 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.44262295082 1.64882698954 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423835401409 0.391690518653 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125924225178 0.123202303941 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0898131947823 0.077325440228 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.518531771081 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166008033291 0.149214159877 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178550130786 0.161403998019 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786533433766 0.0892212321368 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.516301090239 0.385218514788 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0371054817256 0.0692045440612 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329421022973 0.275328986314 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221253140842 0.0653680567796 34% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30420353982 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.66592920354 191% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.5995575221 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.