Laws should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.

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Laws should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.

Laws are the weapons for maintaining the peace and the harmony in the state. They play a pivotal role by helping authorities or formal government to maintain an innocuous environment. Even facts about our ancestors, sun revolving around earth changed with the passage of time so do the laws are needed to be changed on account of various circumstances, times and places. So, I completely agree with the author.

Situations in our community have been changing since time immemorial, so according to changing situations laws governing people also need to change.
To quote an example, Law of a single child was sanctioned in China due to the exponential rise in the population of the country. But the aftereffects of the earthquakes led the law makers to rethink and it was modified to have two children as legal. Similarly, in earlier times of male dominating society
women were not considered as heirs of their parents. But now every offspring regardless of being male or female is the legal heir of their parents. Circumspect of this
law is will made a person. This example is epitome to show that laws should be molded according to circumstances and era in which it is implemented.

Although, I agree that laws are needed to be stoic for having a harmonious environment in the society. But, the same punishment can not be given to two different
people charged for a murdering someone. One might have done it is for the sake of money or intentionally, other might do it with an intention of self-protection. So,
it very obvious that both should not be punished alike. In such cases, judges need to cognitively think and understand the situation.

Laws help the authorities to decide the punishment for a wrongdoing. But from discussion, it is cogent that laws are made to govern people and not to
rule the lives of people or make it suffocating.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'make' or 'be made'?
Suggestion: make; be made
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 317.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88958990536 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95391464983 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558359621451 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8031742161 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.1111111111 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 5.21951772744 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.97078651685 201% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204412413526 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598280446543 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606980099351 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772992778503 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642285735819 0.0667264976115 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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