Mass media and the internet have caused people’s attention spans to get shorter. However, the overall effect has been positive: while people are less able to focus on one thing, they more than make up for it with an enhanced ability to sort through large quantities of information and find what’s important.
The Internet has grown a lot since it its existence came into the world. It has become an integral part of almost every human being in every country. And because of that mass media has also become more popular.Not long ago when the printing newspaper was the main medium for the news to get pervasive.However, due to a large amount of information being provided from the internet and people might get confused which is the important new for them.
First, because we get a large amount of information from the internet as well as mass media, we can not decide which information is important to us. And this might lead people to involved in either unimportant information or they might get into some other trouble.
Second, There is a chance of being fooled or getting the rumors of anything. That might misguide the people and ultimately have the deleterious effect in the community. For example, if any video, image or any media information has gone viral and which is also a rumor. this thing might lead into a sudden chaos in people.Additionally, if this rumor is profane then it is also possible that certain group of people will get into fights.
Finally, some people might think that certain social media sites are boon for the human being. But it is also proved that overuse of social media leads to depression and certain psychological disorders. There has also been the example of people doing suicides because of it.
In conclusion, It is not true to say that mass media and the internet have caused the positive effects on people given that people often get into certain psychological disorders, rumors being spread and troubling themselves by wasting their productive time into unproductive ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 291.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92439862543 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73951493457 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515463917526 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.7931331699 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.230769231 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 5.21951772744 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225127003609 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816212965726 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503626082532 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134796373213 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264387392861 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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