A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
For an education system to be stated as unbiased, there is a need for it to be streamlined so that everyone can face the disadvantage it offers, and at the same time make use of the advantages. One cannot judge a candidate if they are not examined under a unified system, and for the whole process to be fair, there has to be a common criteria on the basis of which the candidates are judged.
Common national curriculum is important for various reasons. First it allows for proper assessment of skills of all the candidates who are sitting for competitive exams. It leaves no possible excuses for the candidates which claim they were treated unfairly. When a person is sitting for an interview at Microsoft, all of the candidates are given the same aptitude test paper which they have to attempt. Specific candidates are selected on the basis of how well they performed in the exam. Because of this no candidate can claim that they were treated unfairly by giving them higher difficulty questions, since it was the same for all. This also helps the company to choose the best out of the lot. A nation should adopt the same technique as well, which calls for the need for a same national curriculum.
There are certain set of advantages which every subject offers and which are very important in day to day life. An accountant is adept with all the problems which involves money, an computer science engineer is good at solving problems related to computer software, a doctor knows how to treat people with illness etc. A person should not be limited to only one set of skills, and a common curriculum can be used to imbibe these in the students. A person who is as good as Sundar Pichai(CEO of Google) and Raghuram Rajan (Current RBI governor) has a greater chance of succeeding in life.
After school, a person, once he is examined on the basis of a common curriculum and possesses all the basic necessary skills, can chose whatever subject he likes the most and can pursue his career full time in college.
A common national curriculum is thus necessary for an unbiased examination of candidate. This will also ensure the credibility of the exam. Once they are properly trained with the necessary basic skills, they can go on to pursue their dreams in college once they are aware with all the possibilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, thus, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 407.0 442.535393258 92% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70515970516 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57144059721 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488943488943 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.808524608 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.388888889 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6111111111 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190798750328 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674733790173 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072937556739 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100693901129 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676849807402 0.0667264976115 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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