As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoni

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As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Technology makes our life much easier and facilitates us. Now technology is everywhere, it is in our home to the workstation. These are some examples of technology- ATM, Food processing plant, Internet, Mobile, Nuclear bomb, Spaceship, Rockets and much more. With the enhancement of technology, we also build robots- we watch the activities which are happening in our celestial bodies, sent rockets into space without a person, internet, mobile, Packaging. With the help of robots, we process the food, manufacturing the cars and glass items, plastic, tools etc. We can also say that technology made our thinking liberal- with this, people knows what is the ability one can do it. In our new generation, everyone learns technology otherwise one cannot get a place or reputation in our society.

In this era, both men and women go to the office, only because of the technology. In our house, we are using washing machines, ovens, microwave, cooking gas, Electric stove, etc. Because of this inventions, the women can also go to work. She is standing with a man in every field. Earlier entire work was manual- Men went outside the house for work where he cut the trees, taking care in the fields, whereas women are at home for household activities and nursing the children. As the result of the technology, both men and women can work- achieve our goals, made a bright and successful career.

The internet is the great concoct of the human. These days, the person can see and talk each other on the internet and mobile phones. Life becomes easier with the internet- one can use online bookings like in a hotel, flight tickets, railway tickets. This will only possible with the benefit of technology. Now one can online purchase things, paying bills, money transferring and much more.

Technology supports us to solve problems but this will also effect on our mind. Nowadays, a person does not remember the contact number and address, one can use calculators, calender, clock timings. Something he wants to do, he goes on internet or phone, just one click on google website and get everything. On the other hand, this also effects on children mind on these days. They are not using our mind for homework- because of this, the mind will not develop in their age. Children spent more time on the internet, mobile phones. At the end, some kids face health issues in their early ages.

As we know the technology grows day by day mostly in every field that facilitates us. We rely on these machines and do not use our brain. We should use the technology to some extent, not slave on these machines. If we do not have any control then technology will destroy us.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...office, only because of the technology. In our house, we are using washing machine...
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Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ng gas, Electric stove, etc. Because of this inventions, the women can also go to wo...
^^^^
Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[7]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...us to solve problems but this will also effect on our mind. Nowadays, a person does no...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 175, Rule ID: CALENDER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'calendar', a system of organizing days? A 'calender' is a machine.
Suggestion: calendar
...r and address, one can use calculators, calender, clock timings. Something he wants to d...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e health issues in their early ages. As we know the technology grows day by day...
^^
Line 9, column 213, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...me extent, not slave on these machines. If we do not have any control then technol...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, whereas, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2209.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 457.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83369803063 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52058449521 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540481400438 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.911342851 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1724137931 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7586206897 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75862068966 5.21951772744 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.83258426966 331% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115473396457 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330653057431 0.0831039109588 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285866778434 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645466143258 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269864662373 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 14.1392134831 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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