As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.

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As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.

Today we stand at a point where we need four things for survival- oxygen, food, shelter, technology.
Technology has made our lives far more convenient than we could ever imagine. It has simplified our life so much that it is hard to think of a single day without it. Technology has touched every aspect of the lives of the people and it is so intricately linked with their lives that in its absence, the world will descend into chaos and anxiety. On one hand, technology enriches our lives and on the other hand, in pursuit of ease we have become so over reliant on technology that now life is impossible without it. Let’s think for a second about what would happen if there is no technology. We would wake up in the morning without alarm (which is surely kind of an impossible task for most of the people), we would go to office/school/college all by walking (because transports and vehicles are technology advancements), also it would be scorching heat outside, no fans, no ACs, no phone to contact other people instantly, no phone to order pizza online and so on. Life would surely be a nightmare without technology. Being a tech freak, life would never be possible without my laptop or phone. I must say technology has over the course of time made our lives faster, easier and comfortable. It is true that technology is getting in the way. I agree that people rely more and more on technology these days to solve problems but I believe the ability of humans to think for themselves has been improving rather than deteriorating. Talking about IT & software world, technology has inevitably led software engineers to make web and mobile applications using various platforms. The platforms which aid the engineers to think and make applications. The technological platforms which help the developers to think of the user experience. No technology can replace the engineers to solve the problems of user interface or user experience. It is the power of the human brain which uses logic and makes possible technology advancements.

Someone has truly said, “Science is a good servant but a bad master of human beings”. No doubt, the use of calculator has lowered human labor to a great extent. The complex calculations which used to require much time before can now be done simply within fraction of seconds. But now-a-days people have become excessively dependent on calculators for every type of calculations be it simple or complex, which ultimately prevent them especially the children and youth to enhance their mental aptitude. And that’s the very reason why old generation are more advanced in mental maths than the new generation. However, this may not be the case with every individual. There are still people who are great at mental mathematics and aptitude.

I agree that technology can be a major inhibitor to the humanity but I also believe that boycotting technology is not the ultimate option. Whether we like it or not, technology is here to stay and an elimination approach is the wrong way to go. You just can’t throw your cell phone out of the window or toss your laptop in the trash because technology will still be a part of your life in one or the other way. But how important that part of your life is up to you. The concern over reliance on technology may lead to deterioration of thinking abilities is valid especially for those people who fail to exercise their brain power. People who take technology for granted. People who rely on technology for every decision of their lives. For example, Television (which is often called as an idiot box) has a greater negative influence on kids and teenagers. It is very true that Television has been prevalent in every aspect of journalism be it news, media, multimedia etc. But watching TV continuously can slow down the metabolic rate and can lead to obesity and other health concerns. Also, it is responsible for reducing brain development.

Well, the advancement of technology is itself a wonder of the human mind. And I believe we need to embrace what technology has to offer and find ways to balance our use of technology with our lives.
We can’t download time, we can’t upload love and we can’t google certain questions of our life. We must actually live some of our life. The development of technology is still dependent on the power of human thinking capabilities. The need of technology is not always to solve our problems but to aid our thought process in solving the real world problems. At last but not the least, the power of the human brain is unfathomable. Let us not limit its power to technology. Let us take the help of technology to channelize our thoughts and become slaves to it.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e morning without alarm which is surely kind of an impossible task for most of the people,...
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...makes possible technology advancements. Someone has truly said, 'Science is...
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... with every individual. There are still people who are great at mental mathematics and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, second, so, still, well, as to, for example, kind of, no doubt, talking about, it is true, on the other hand, to a great extent

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 19.5258426966 189% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 12.4196629213 201% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 35.0 14.8657303371 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 33.0505617978 227% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 103.0 58.6224719101 176% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3910.0 2235.4752809 175% => OK
No of words: 807.0 442.535393258 182% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84510532838 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.32989168958 4.55969084622 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84286353888 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 363.0 215.323595506 169% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449814126394 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1260.9 704.065955056 179% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 44.0 20.2370786517 217% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.1525672209 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8636363636 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3409090909 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77272727273 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293813675565 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690065404683 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817506517496 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129110973405 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794653027489 0.0667264976115 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 158.0 100.480337079 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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