As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Technology is a boon for human beings. As time passes, technology is growing more day by day.
As people is relying more and more on technology to solve their problem, their ability to think, act and do productive work is reducing. As a result, technology will supersede human beings. There have been various examples which clearly elicit that humans have become more dependent on technology for their small iota of work.
To illustrate how technology is affecting us, let us go back in time, pioneer to the invention of calculators, people used to calculate numbers manually or with the help of abacus. But with the invention of calculator, we have become so dependent on calculator that, even for a very simple calculation we need calculator. Without any doubt, technology has made us more dormant day by day.
Additionally, with the invention of Artificial Intelligence and machine learning, we may be able to supersede human resources with machines. Artificial Intelligence and machine learning is a very powerful technology, it adepts from the humans. In this circumstances, we need to ask ourself, what we have achieved and what we want to achieve and how far we want to go. Because rapid growth in technology is also baneful.
Now a days many inventions are happing around the world to solve our problems. Now, we are converting our kitchen into smart kitchen, which helps in recycling all the organic waste, in a way relying on technology is also helpful. Because of the growth in technology, we are growing as a human. We have reached march to examine any sign of life, we have created electricity with renewable resources, and many more. So, we cannot completely blame technology for our deterioration, we as a human should know where we need to rely on technology. Every thing comes with a pros and cons.
In conclusion, although the ability of humans is deteriorating with the growth of technology. As long as we are very clear in our thoughts, development and inventions of new technology, this is not a big problem, but we should know where we need to stop. In fact, with the proliferation in technology we are also improving significantly. But one must not fully depend on technology for his daily work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 137, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...act and do productive work is reducing. As a result, technology will supersede hum...
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Line 6, column 248, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...chnology, it adepts from the humans. In this circumstances, we need to ask ourself, ...
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Line 6, column 369, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t to achieve and how far we want to go. Because rapid growth in technology is also bane...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...rowth in technology is also baneful. Now a days many inventions are happing around the ...
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Line 8, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...h in technology is also baneful. Now a days many inventions are happing around the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 376.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93617021277 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9532296199 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507978723404 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1302584574 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3636363636 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.68181818182 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194293797841 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717730538609 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533579585551 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125769225998 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753184452264 0.0667264976115 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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