as people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
The statement claims that relying on technology to solve problems, causes the deterioration of the ability of humans to think for themselves. The statement unstated assumption is that we should solve our problems without resorting to the technologies. I found the statement flawed in several aspects.
To begin with, detractors of the technology raise an issue about some disadvantages regarding the use of technology. When for doing the routine works we use technology, our ability might be atrophied. Consider that the saving the phone number in mind has ceded its place to the contacts in the s...
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