People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
Emotion is complex entity.We as human race, have advanced in different facets of technology, science etc., but have still not understood emotions to the extent of what it should be. Emotions are convoluted, tortous, at times even absurd, but it is what sets us apart from machines and makes us more of humans. It is one of the most intergral part of human psyche, behaviour and decision making. It is not a new scientific fact that, conciously, subconciously, most part of the decision are based on emotions. This is the charaterstic which differentiates between a good decision maker and a bad decision maker. A good decision maker is one who is stolid, rational, dispassionated and unbaised to the stituation and does not get trapped into emotions before making a decision.
It is mostly the case that, the people who makes decision based a emotions are not a good decision and there lies a category of people who are even worst, who justify their wrong decision with logic. For example, A elected president who has personal haterd with a certain community, in each and every way tries to defame that community because of this hatred but unfortunately his dosen't realize that, what he is doing inturn is going to cause a problem for himself
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 58.6224719101 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 2235.4752809 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 213.0 442.535393258 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84507042254 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77473129686 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 215.323595506 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586854460094 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 704.065955056 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1716120474 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313412825068 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127625815144 0.0831039109588 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101655246598 0.0758088955206 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24614708068 0.150359130593 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414934822979 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.