People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
It is popularly believed that our behavior and attitude is widely determined by our nearest surroundings. However, is this viewpoint unquestionable? As far as I am concerned the main role in forming our attitude belongs to society, it creates our personality, system of values, understanding of appropriate and inappropriate conduct and gives us schemes or patterns of social behavior.
First of all, the role of society on us is enormous. We are the product of society and our reaction and attitude is widely determined by the society. First of all our system of values and the way by which we perceive the world is the product of the society and without social impact we have never become human beings. For instance, the understanding of appropriate behavior differs significantly in each culture. In western society we tend to be individualists and we see our own interests more important than others. In Asian culture we have an opposing understanding of the issue. Moreover, even such fundamental concept as death is distinct in each culture. In African society, for example, if a child dies, it is not a reason to cry owing to the fact that the child has done nothing to the social group. However, if a elderly ceases his existence, the tribe will be in deep sorrow because an important member of the group has passed. In western society, we once again have opposing perception of death. For a European a death of a child is unrealized opportunity and therefore the reason to regret, the death of old person is just the way of life. In other words, our reaction on many grave issues is determined by our society.
At the same time, we are not rigid; we are able to adapt to new condition, however, our ability to change is limited by our personality which is the product of society. For example, if a person moves to a new culture, in many cases one will mimic the habits and traditions of new culture. A Russian who moved to USA, for instance, may start to celebrate national holidays etc. At the same time, the possibility to adapt to new surroundings is limited. Imagine that you started to live in Iran, this is a country with strong Muslim traditions. In this culture, for example, woman is limited in her rights. Will you accept this tradition? In many cases this point of view is disparate to personal beliefs and therefore it will not be accepted.
In conclusion, our personality, attitude, the way by which we react are mainly determined by society. It forms us and our view point. Despite the fact that we can adapt to new conditions our possibility to change is restricted by our personal principles which are settled by society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 821, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...othing to the social group. However, if a elderly ceases his existence, the tribe...
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Line 3, column 831, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'cease'?
Suggestion: cease
...the social group. However, if a elderly ceases his existence, the tribe will be in dee...
^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'first of all', 'in many cases', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236434108527 0.240241500013 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.149224806202 0.157235817809 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0872093023256 0.0880659088768 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0406976744186 0.0497285424764 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0755813953488 0.0444667217837 170% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.12984496124 0.12292977631 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0348837209302 0.0406280797675 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85472446934 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0348837209302 0.030933414821 113% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0872093023256 0.0997080785238 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0116279069767 0.0249443105267 47% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00968992248062 0.0148568991511 65% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2652.0 2732.02544248 97% => OK
No of words: 460.0 452.878318584 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7652173913 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.34347826087 0.366273622748 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.276086956522 0.280924506359 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.191304347826 0.200843997647 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108695652174 0.132149295362 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85472446934 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 219.290929204 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454347826087 0.48968727796 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.6553361262 55.4138127331 91% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6194690265 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.6923076923 23.380412469 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5368086165 59.4972553346 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 141.124799967 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 23.380412469 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 45.3010033445 51.4728631049 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.51094890511 1.64882698954 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316425058945 0.391690518653 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.111092031362 0.123202303941 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.092363201304 0.077325440228 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.474043031276 0.547984918172 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.164664788681 0.149214159877 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116424747125 0.161403998019 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708452884637 0.0892212321368 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.422040513944 0.385218514788 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.044993887684 0.0692045440612 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224025899909 0.275328986314 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504327415422 0.0653680567796 77% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.30420353982 170% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.