People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situations or surrounding than by society as a whole.

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People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situations or surrounding than by society as a whole.

Does the attitude of the people depends on the immediate situations or surrounding or it is dependent on the society which he/she belongs?. This is a complex issue. However, the nature and attitude of any person is largely dependent on the society in which he/she grows and brought up. But there are certain situations in which it is very much dependent on the immediate and surrounding situations. I consider the author's statement is far more correct from my point of view because the immediate circumstances and environment is very much dependent in the attitude of the people rather the society factor.
The first reason that supports the claim is that in the fast developing world it is very much necessary to be with the latest advancement of the technology and situations. If a person wants to do only what his/her societies ancestor did than it is very difficult to survive in this fast growing environment. Thus, the attitude of the people is dependent more on the immediate situations than the society.

The world is filled with certain examples that encountered the more impact of the immediate situations rather than the society. Consider the example of Mahatma Gandhi, who was a prominent lawyer and was brought up in a typical gujarat society who always stays happy in its own life. But the train incident which took place in South Africa has changed his view of seeing the world. After that incident he made up his mind to fight for the truth and give justice to the society. If the train incident would have not happened than it would be a different scenario and Indians would have not got the Mohandas Gandhi as a Father Of The Nation but as a lawyer. Thus, immediate situations play very important roles in the life rather than the society.

The other reason to take into consideration is that the immediate situations and circumstances play a vital role in the development of the person’s attitude. Scientific research has also shown great evidences that the attitude of the people is dependent more on the immediate actions and situations. There is apotheosis saying that 'the fruit changes its color seeing the color of the surrounding fruit'. This is a well said proverb which clearly states that it is the surrounding environment that changes the attitude of the people rather than the society.

Despite this all claims the confluence of society on the nature, behavior and attitude is also immense. The society in which a person borns and is brought up teaches him/her many things which are the ethics of his life and hence plays a vital role in the attitude of the people.

Summing up all these claims the authors claim regarding the determination of attitude is a skeptical issue. But I consider that the society plays a vital role in the determination of the people’s attitude but it is more influenced by the immediate situations. And hence the people's attitude are determined by their immediate situations than by society as a whole.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'thus', 'well']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252767527675 0.240241500013 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.145756457565 0.157235817809 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0867158671587 0.0880659088768 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0479704797048 0.0497285424764 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0313653136531 0.0444667217837 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125461254613 0.12292977631 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0332103321033 0.0406280797675 82% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75200508842 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0110701107011 0.030933414821 36% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00922509225092 0.0016655270985 554% => OK
Determiners: 0.154981549815 0.0997080785238 155% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00553505535055 0.0249443105267 22% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0239852398524 0.0148568991511 161% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2990.0 2732.02544248 109% => OK
No of words: 505.0 452.878318584 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92079207921 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.58838876751 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.354455445545 0.366273622748 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.277227722772 0.280924506359 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.188118811881 0.200843997647 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.124752475248 0.132149295362 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75200508842 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 219.290929204 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.394059405941 0.48968727796 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.6453275475 55.4138127331 81% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6194690265 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.9565217391 23.380412469 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6172141014 59.4972553346 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 141.124799967 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9565217391 23.380412469 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.434782608696 0.674092028746 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 49.6792940164 51.4728631049 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.82786885246 1.64882698954 111% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153593987239 0.391690518653 39% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.15913472964 0.123202303941 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.100980958238 0.077325440228 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.6443501658 0.547984918172 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156695311967 0.149214159877 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863594932345 0.161403998019 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112108821739 0.0892212321368 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.575486498155 0.385218514788 149% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0305979409592 0.0692045440612 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120908081684 0.275328986314 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844940525031 0.0653680567796 129% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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