People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
People’s behavior plays a fundamental role towards society. People only think, what the bad people want to think. They do the brainwash, set own wishes in their minds and hence they spread badness. I agree, the people get forced to make agree on their opinion, thinks bad and at last, suffer much trouble by an awful crowd.
In the name of religion, race they do the mindset to the other people. As we know, the bad public creates the conflict throughout the globe, their only job to distress and spread badness . Moreover, some awful people in politics spread what they want to, their action against the peace, hence threatening the people, produce violence in public. As a result, the situation becomes worst and many persons lose their life. This all happens because some forces make them think like that way. Apparently, illiterate public disturbed first, they come in their talk easily and others think as they want.
Every nation is powerful in their own way but some people spread negative thoughts to others. They think our country is more superior than any other country across the world, set the others brain as we are more superior and in result public fight between each other, get threatened and become voilent against other society or country.
Several regions have their own colonization and lives in their colonization. Some bad people do the mind wash so that no one can thinks to go away from an own crowd, even some of mind was made since from childhood days. If anyone wants to go another side, one must threaten by their society. Therefore, many of them get violent and become war. This stuff we watch by many news channels on television nowadays.
Although, our public lives in love and peace. Patriotism is a good moral characteristics of our society but if someone gets effect by this, that would be unacceptable. In addition, everyone should obey the rules, so that the crime does not increase in our country. The government should make strict laws against these conflicts or wars.
In the nutshell, everyone wants to live in love and peace but some awful people changes the mind of others, by doing brainwash to the society. These insincere people spread bad talks and set the mind of others as they want. However, everyone is talking about a particular matter and hence forcefully think, that will be correct. The government should pass strict laws and decrease the crime rate in a country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...t the bad people want to think. They do the brainwash, set own wishes in their minds and henc...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... only job to distress and spread badness . Moreover, some awful people in politics...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[2]
Message: The adjective more is normally used with to and does not need 'more' (so called implicit comparative). Probably you need to write: 'superior to'.
Suggestion: superior to
...ts to others. They think our country is more superior than any other country across the world, set...
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Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
...ple do the mind wash so that no one can thinks to go away from an own crowd, even some...
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Line 7, column 194, Rule ID: MAKE_SINCE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sense'?
Suggestion: sense
...n own crowd, even some of mind was made since from childhood days. If anyone wants to...
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Line 9, column 74, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'characteristic'?
Suggestion: characteristic
...e and peace. Patriotism is a good moral characteristics of our society but if someone gets effe...
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Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...decrease the crime rate in a country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, even so, in addition, talking about, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2030.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 415.0 442.535393258 94% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89156626506 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39258419593 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53734939759 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6475881655 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.13820224719 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0842132009504 0.243740707755 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0282514823097 0.0831039109588 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297466338163 0.0758088955206 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0494951155156 0.150359130593 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038170125611 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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