Primary goal of education is to get a job.
Education is the first step of Success. Without education one might end up struggling for his daily living unless, he or she belongs to a super rich family. Education gives you knowledge, ideas and ways to implement those ideas. One of the important benefit of education is to get a job with a handsome salary, which lets you fulfill your desires. It is not necessary to educate yourself with some particular field, but, the field of education should be choosen with great confidence and propensity toward your goals. Who knows with great knowledge you might end up being a great innovator.
According to me, basic education is most essential for every person on earth- it lets you know the world, how things work?, where you stand?, And what you want to be? Moreover, atleast, it guarantees to get you a job, which is essencial for the survival. Those who are not able to pusue their dream should atleast have a primary education degree to stand somewhere in this world.
Anyone who wants to achieve their goals can select their field and start exploring. In this generation, it is anyway possible to have a career inn any field of study. It is 'propensity', required to stick to your particular field and collect or discover those new, innovative ideas. Consider an exalple of Elon Musk, founder and CEO of SpaceX. He always had this propensity towards space exploration or astronomy. From the very begining of his teenage, he started to learn as much about the space by reading books about space, astronomy, astrophysics, rocket science. With his his dedication, he is now a revolutionist is Space Industry. It is not necessarily to be a god gifted to be super talented, but, hard work is what counts.
With satisfactory education, one can get a good job. While doinng job, you learn new things, how things work. This knowledge isn't waste but, for your own good. Knowledge gained from industry can be applied in respective fields. Might be someday you end up coming with your own innovative idea which will be definitely praised by world.
It is true, that primary goal of education is to get a job, but also to gain knowledge, for your good and for the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Who” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...dence and propensity toward your goals. Who knows with great knowledge you might en...
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ight end up being a great innovator. According to me, basic education is most essential for ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: his
...omy, astrophysics, rocket science. With his his dedication, he is now a revolutionist i...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...things, how things work. This knowledge isnt waste but, for your own good. Knowledg...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'anyway', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'while', 'you know', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208816705336 0.240241500013 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.171693735499 0.157235817809 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0835266821346 0.0880659088768 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0348027842227 0.0497285424764 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0835266821346 0.0444667217837 188% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0881670533643 0.12292977631 72% => OK
Participles: 0.0278422273782 0.0406280797675 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59831033825 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0417633410673 0.030933414821 135% => OK
Particles: 0.00696055684455 0.0016655270985 418% => OK
Determiners: 0.0696055684455 0.0997080785238 70% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0185614849188 0.0249443105267 74% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0255220417633 0.0148568991511 172% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2171.0 2732.02544248 79% => OK
No of words: 376.0 452.878318584 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77393617021 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.313829787234 0.366273622748 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.234042553191 0.280924506359 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.162234042553 0.200843997647 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127659574468 0.132149295362 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59831033825 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 219.290929204 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542553191489 0.48968727796 111% => OK
Word variations: 60.4172078165 55.4138127331 109% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6194690265 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.347826087 23.380412469 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2031132146 59.4972553346 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3913043478 141.124799967 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.347826087 23.380412469 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.434782608696 0.674092028746 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 39.7520814061 51.4728631049 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.12 1.64882698954 68% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430102086769 0.391690518653 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0968977292216 0.123202303941 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0686759482151 0.077325440228 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.455361629088 0.547984918172 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162032187151 0.149214159877 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136491262087 0.161403998019 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125413977446 0.0892212321368 141% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.213618169251 0.385218514788 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.08801369231 0.0692045440612 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287945274472 0.275328986314 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140714701344 0.0653680567796 215% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.4325221239 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88274336283 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.