The purpose of many advertisements is to make consumers want to buy a product so that they will 'be like' the person in the ad. This practice is effective because it not only sells products but also helps people feel better about themselves.
Many people buy products because they want to be like the models of advertisements and that is how the purpose of an ad is fulfilled. So,it can be stated that this approach is effective but this does not necessarily make people feel better about themselves, a contrary view is more evident.
In today's world advertisements are an effective means of pursuing people. In these ads most of the time a model is represented with cool manners, gorgeous outfits and too many admirers around them...creating a definition of "perfect & happy life".people wants to be like them most of the times and they tend to buy the product. for instance the ads of shaving creams, a boy wants to be as handsome and admired by girls as the guy in the commercial ad and buys it...though he knows that using that cream would not necessarily make him handsome but he gets attracted to the product subconsciously. however buying a shaving cream is easy but not all the products come with a price tag that can be handled easy. Such a luxurious cars. This is when people don't feel good about themselves and get frustrated. An unfilled wish burdens him. The speaker's assertion does not hold true here.
The luxuries and king-sized lifestyle usually televised through advertisements sometimes result in social crimes. Now a days, in the third world countries and in developed countries it is a common scenario that sons and daughters are murdering their own parents and relatives because they fail to provide them money for expensive cell phones, hang outs at luxurious meeting places and speedy motor bikes. For these cases the tendency to imitate people in the advertisement make them to distinguish between just and unjust. They feel themselves incomplete without the products in their possession.
As every coin has two sides and no view in universal, there are exceptions. Watching the ads of healthy sugar alternatives and quit -smoking chewing gums people feel good about themselves and want to keep them healthy and fit. This intention make them to buy the products. The models of these ads make people desire a good and healthy life.
The statement is mostly correct. peoples' tendency to be like the person they see in the advertisements helps to sell products but not always it makes them feel good about themselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, third, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 388.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97422680412 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86478914956 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538659793814 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 78.0559254637 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05 5.21951772744 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412575202641 0.243740707755 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107239901752 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107705104654 0.0758088955206 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250458551431 0.150359130593 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114745982278 0.0667264976115 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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