Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
When it comes to the issue the importance of preservation endangered species, some people believe that we have an obligation to protect not only endangered species but also whole creatures. However, others have the opposite view. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account of the following reasons.
To illustrate my position, let us take a look on why some people dislike the idea of protection of species. To preserve the nature and species, we need to pay much money for researches and employees, while most countries have not a proper economic condition.
Although I admit that we have to spend much money for protecting species, I believe that advantages of this project are apparent. The first reason is that our survival depends on nature and species. Every species have a certain role to keep balance nature, and extinction each of them can disrupt the life cycle. Hence, we have to preserve all animals in order to maintain our survival.
A further point we must consider is that human has an ethical duty to protect on nature, because they are reprehensible in animals’ extinction. Some people say that several extinctions were happened in the history of the Earth, so it is a common process and we should not interfere with it. However, they ignore that the scenario is different in the recent age. After industrial revolution, human activities had increased so tremendously that nature is not able to restore itself.
All above evidence supports this undeniable that we should protect other species because our survival depends on them, and also it is a moral responsible. Of course, as an English proverb goes “a coin has two sides”; therefore, those who have the opposite view partially reasonable that this project surely is expensive. Nevertheless, I think that its profits outweigh disadvantages.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'i think', 'of course']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.225988700565 0.240241500013 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.152542372881 0.157235817809 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0988700564972 0.0880659088768 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.045197740113 0.0497285424764 91% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0762711864407 0.0444667217837 172% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.110169491525 0.12292977631 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0112994350282 0.0406280797675 28% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.85168588434 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0310734463277 0.030933414821 100% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.101694915254 0.0997080785238 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0112994350282 0.0249443105267 45% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00847457627119 0.0148568991511 57% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1894.0 2732.02544248 69% => OK
No of words: 310.0 452.878318584 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.10967741935 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.58838876751 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.383870967742 0.366273622748 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.322580645161 0.280924506359 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.206451612903 0.200843997647 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.129032258065 0.132149295362 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85168588434 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 219.290929204 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583870967742 0.48968727796 119% => OK
Word variations: 63.9846488556 55.4138127331 115% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 18.2352941176 23.380412469 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9026628937 59.4972553346 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.411764706 141.124799967 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 23.380412469 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.764705882353 0.674092028746 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 50.4933586338 51.4728631049 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.26804123711 1.64882698954 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356547123525 0.391690518653 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10039501339 0.123202303941 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0794302487528 0.077325440228 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.522491537019 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.110661034778 0.149214159877 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129719390709 0.161403998019 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072333254399 0.0892212321368 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.306574503673 0.385218514788 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.04683752948 0.0692045440612 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227767372532 0.275328986314 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563007071389 0.0653680567796 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.5995575221 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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