Some people argue that successful leaders in government, industry, or other fields must be highly competitive. Other people claim that in order to be successful, a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others.
The statement asserts that to be successful leader, you should be competitive in your field. Any field you choose politics, science, or artistic there is competition in each and every field and you should always try to be competitive. While on the other hand you should also be willing to cooperate with others. Success comes hand in hand by simultaneously working on both the sides.
On one hand the writer says that leaders should be competitive in different fields to be successive. Leaders are the main part of the organization if we take that there is no competition in the world then there would be monopoly and people will be in forced to take the item and the company would be on the top and can charge any amount for a product they want. For example if two companies Pepsico and Cocacola will merge then there would be no competition and people would be force to take drinks from the company at any price. So to prevent this situation there are competitions so that a company will not charge so much and in order to attract the customers company will give a product at a reasonable price. By taking the competitions industry would exhort to make nicer and useful products. The new products will be better than product they server previously as well as the product their competitor has made.
Not only in industry but also in politics if country is not democratic and there is only one leader than country will be forced to considered the decision taken by the leader. Without competition leader will not do anything for the welfare of the people and as a result people will be aggressive which will lead to riots and many more problems. So in order to maintain the peace and growth of the country competitions are always required.
On the other hand if the competition prevails then the leader of that industry will be forced to take some stringent steps to main the decorum. By this workers will not be happy and will not do the work willingly. If the leader is martinet and will not allow his subordinate to make innovation, company will never be successful. So to make the company successful leader should cooperate with workers and should listen to their needs and to fulfil it. In politics also if the leaders will cooperate with their subordinates new ideas will prevail and nicer government will be formed as a result of it.
In conclusion, competition is part of the inherent nature but to cooperate with the colleagues and subordinate is also very essential for the success. Competition and cooperation goes hand in hand on path of success, we cannot live behind any of them to become successful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ou should always try to be competitive. While on the other hand you should also be wi...
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Line 3, column 728, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'competitions'' or 'competition's'?
Suggestion: competitions'; competition's
...ct at a reasonable price. By taking the competitions industry would exhort to make nicer and...
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Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...stringent steps to main the decorum. By this workers will not be happy and will not ...
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Line 9, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ehind any of them to become successful.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224279835391 0.240241500013 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.154320987654 0.157235817809 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0699588477366 0.0880659088768 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0617283950617 0.0497285424764 124% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0329218106996 0.0444667217837 74% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127572016461 0.12292977631 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0164609053498 0.0406280797675 41% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.65210435695 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0411522633745 0.030933414821 133% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.102880658436 0.0997080785238 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0617283950617 0.0249443105267 247% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00205761316872 0.0148568991511 14% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2628.0 2732.02544248 96% => OK
No of words: 459.0 452.878318584 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72549019608 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.320261437908 0.366273622748 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.220043572985 0.280924506359 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.150326797386 0.200843997647 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108932461874 0.132149295362 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65210435695 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 219.290929204 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.411764705882 0.48968727796 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.3319279604 55.4138127331 82% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.95 23.380412469 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8398025737 59.4972553346 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.4 141.124799967 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.95 23.380412469 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.674092028746 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 44.9543572985 51.4728631049 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.47933884298 1.64882698954 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333448813257 0.391690518653 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.181497275189 0.123202303941 147% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.094444225377 0.077325440228 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.587755507777 0.547984918172 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.118468771987 0.149214159877 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154169411264 0.161403998019 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804721678811 0.0892212321368 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.445778181285 0.385218514788 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.103429079194 0.0692045440612 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231666295029 0.275328986314 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650783182002 0.0653680567796 100% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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