Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the
societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility
of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own
position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting
your position, you should address both of the views presented.
I strongly agree that corporation must, ultimately, targeting well-being of public as well as the surrounding in order to live in harmony.
To commence with, corporation is, ostensibly, form to maintain, improve and regulate the life of human being. A better life-style would only be achieved by conservation of environment and its element, unequivocally. If there is not fresh air or pure water, there will be no life. For instance, form decades, different civilization have only focused on their autonomous lives, as a result environmental consequences have come in to picture, such as, global worming melting ice and increasing sea level. Finally, this has become worldwide issue gathering all governments to step a step to conserve the planet, which, directly or indirectly leads to the better and sound life of all living creature. It is, therefore, necessary to the duty of all authorities to promote environment to make world a better place to live.
Furthermore, environment is, however, not the only factor to work on, along with that rules, regulation and security of common people is also paramount. Without such factors, society would be disordered. Imagine the life of ancient people, who accommodated in woods, ate whatever they get and fight for whatever they seek. Nevertheless, modern civilization has come far beyond that, they don’t sleep in a cave, instead, they have created concrete houses, they don’t eat anything, whereas, they have engendered various spices, and they don't fight, they earn whatever they covet. Despite all, true government avail their endeavor by proffering education, health; in terms of hospitals, safety and employment opportunity by giving best of resources. Thus, it can be said that these characteristics are the most essential for quality of life.
On the controversial side, some may argue that it is only responsibility of corporation to give their all focus on rising economy, rather than anything else. As per the common sense that without money there would be no amenities as world's top leading countries have higher GDP, for that reason they have a standard living. To respond that, Bhutan, a small Asian country-even smaller than a single state of India, is deemed to be the happiest nation among all, not due to the significant GDP of nation, but provision of facilities given by their king as well as government, free resident, free basic household and much more, is the best epitome of well-being of society.
To recapitulate, economic growth is crucial, yet it is a product to enhance severity of mankind by handing rule, regulation, safety, health and atmosphere around us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 546, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ave engendered various spices, and they dont fight, they earn whatever they covet. D...
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Line 17, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...afety, health and atmosphere around us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2243.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 425.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27764705882 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96945837569 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621176470588 0.4932671777 126% => OK
syllable_count: 702.9 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0219031472 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.941176471 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64705882353 5.21951772744 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250241468891 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657452007809 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491890475076 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112294017126 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066833732773 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 100.480337079 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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