Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts. Write a response in which you

Art is an activity that is essential to human beings. Many kinds of arts are regarded as ways of entertainment for people after work. In India, after harvesting crops, farmers would hold singing competitions as well as shows, such as the song and dance duet which is famous in central India until now, to spend their free time. Nowadays, the young generations always visit the art exhibitions or Museum on holidays for relaxing and refreshing. Besides the function of entertainment, people would borrow the forms of arts to express their inner feels, for example, loving songs, such as My Heart Will Go On, are used to express the love of a couple in Titanic. Thus, lacking of arts, people’s daily life cannot be colorful.

But quite different from agriculture and industry that can directly produce products and commerce which can generate profits through buying and selling, the arts can hardly give the artists a large number of rewards in form of money. And few artists or amateurs can provide affluent money to build their own museums and concert halls for painting exhibitions and concerts. Van Gogh only sold one of his paintings during his life time with a little money and always worried about his three meals. There was no chance that he could support his own art show, let alone advertising to spread his ideas and art styles. The arts and artists themselves may not be strong enough to extend arts to more people even though needs for arts may eager.

Government funding may be the best way to solve this conflict. The functioning of the government is based on taxes from citizens and it is the duty for it to provide public goods. Thus, plunging moneys to support the development and spread of arts, such as giving allowances to eminent artists and holding competitions and exhibitions, is the government’s responsibility.

Some people hold the idea that government funding would have a negative influence on the arts integrity. They assume that, as with money, intervenes from the government would influence the artists when they selecting themes they want to present. Politicians may prefer to give money to the painters who praise their policies and public servicers do not favor the songs deride their low working efficiency. The case cited above would never happen as most media is charged by the private.

Actually, by well-designed policies, we can even give money to arts without harming their independence. The government can allocate taxes income to a N.G.O and let the organization spent money to hold exhibitions and help artists. Thus, the worry of some people can be eliminated.

Clearly then, I hold the opinion that arts can only be development under the financial support of the government.

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Average: 7.5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Suggestion: lifetime
...ly sold one of his paintings during his life time with a little money and always worried ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arts'' or 'art's'?
Suggestion: arts'; art's
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...government can allocate taxes income to a N.G.O and let the organization spent mo...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: O
...ment can allocate taxes income to a N.G.O and let the organization spent money to...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'besides', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'for example', 'such as', 'as well as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.290196078431 0.240241500013 121% => OK
Verbs: 0.143137254902 0.157235817809 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0627450980392 0.0880659088768 71% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0490196078431 0.0497285424764 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0392156862745 0.0444667217837 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.103921568627 0.12292977631 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0313725490196 0.0406280797675 77% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70387177794 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0352941176471 0.030933414821 114% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.078431372549 0.0997080785238 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0372549019608 0.0249443105267 149% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0137254901961 0.0148568991511 92% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2747.0 2732.02544248 101% => OK
No of words: 456.0 452.878318584 101% => OK
Chars per words: 6.02412280702 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.342105263158 0.366273622748 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241228070175 0.280924506359 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.162280701754 0.200843997647 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.107456140351 0.132149295362 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70387177794 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 219.290929204 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559210526316 0.48968727796 114% => OK
Word variations: 67.5074627593 55.4138127331 122% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.7272727273 23.380412469 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8205872014 59.4972553346 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.863636364 141.124799967 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 23.380412469 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 0.674092028746 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 44.8500797448 51.4728631049 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.83898305085 1.64882698954 112% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.582222557232 0.391690518653 149% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.106090587106 0.123202303941 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0658719347234 0.077325440228 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.534661756289 0.547984918172 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.168897105856 0.149214159877 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217282913235 0.161403998019 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113804277919 0.0892212321368 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.329597175382 0.385218514788 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0497559164244 0.0692045440612 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.391392986599 0.275328986314 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438207775175 0.0653680567796 67% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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