Some people believe that increasing violence in the media is the cause of increasing violence in our society, especially among children. Others believe that children's peer groups and parental role models are a much more powerful influence on children's behavior.
The issue that increasing violence in society, especially among children, is because of the violence in media which is the belief of some people while others believe that a children's behavior is largely influenced by peer groups and parental role is a contentious one. While both sides have their strengths and weaknesses, I beleive that peer group and parental role have more influence on a child's behavior.
Throughout the day, children are either with their parents or with their friends. If there are continuous fights in the house between the tyro's parents or if there is a lot of negativity in the house, it has a very bad impact on the minds of naive children. Also when they are with their friends, if their friends are involved in acts like smoking or drinking, it would also, upto some extent, affect young child's minds. Thus it is the duty of parents to be very careful as to how they behave infront of their children as well as they should alsways keep an eye on the peer group of their child.
If we look at the positive side, a child on growing can become a responsible citizen of his country, if his parents imbibe good values in him. Children are always curious to know different things that happen around them, thus parents should tactfully try to educate them and mould them so that their minds are always pure and free from bad thoughts. The best way to do this is by communicating with the child, for example, whenever the child comes returns home from school or college, parents should ask him or her about their daily activities. In this way parents are aware of what is going on in their child's life. A little negligence can lead a child into doing indecorous things.
Also, if we go to see media also has a bit of influnce on the younger generation. Nowadays, children consider movie stars and sports stars to be their role model. Whatever activites, their role model does, they try to emulate it. For example, if there are stunt scenes in a particular movie,childrena re so influenced by that, without giving a second thought that it must be done with all the safety measures, they try to do it at home. This is very dangerous as it may even lead to death. Thus now the media people have to tell to not try these stunts at home.
To add to this, social media is trending these days. This is another example which has captured young minds to a great extent. But there has also been an increase in social media crimes. Frauds and plagiarism has increased and it has landed many in jail. If no steps are taken by the government in increasing the security or educating the youth, it will continue to rise and willlead to destruction.
In conclusion, I would say that before facing the outside world a child learns at home so the influence of parents play a major role. Also a child's personality is formed in the growing years itself and friends also have a significant role init after parents.For these reasons, I feel parents and peer groups have a much greater influence on child's behavior than media.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'i feel', 'in conclusion', 'as well as', 'to a great extent']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241146711636 0.240241500013 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.156829679595 0.157235817809 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.070826306914 0.0880659088768 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0472175379427 0.0497285424764 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0674536256324 0.0444667217837 152% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.133220910624 0.12292977631 108% => OK
Participles: 0.035413153457 0.0406280797675 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.45837421624 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0286677908938 0.030933414821 93% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0978077571669 0.0997080785238 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0168634064081 0.0249443105267 68% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0134907251265 0.0148568991511 91% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3034.0 2732.02544248 111% => OK
No of words: 541.0 452.878318584 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60813308688 6.0361032391 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82280071112 4.58838876751 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.301293900185 0.366273622748 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.205175600739 0.280924506359 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.134935304991 0.200843997647 67% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0794824399261 0.132149295362 60% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45837421624 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 219.290929204 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504621072089 0.48968727796 103% => OK
Word variations: 61.0022145939 55.4138127331 110% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6194690265 116% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5416666667 23.380412469 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6282606674 59.4972553346 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.416666667 141.124799967 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5416666667 23.380412469 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.674092028746 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 43.0592267406 51.4728631049 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.50931677019 1.64882698954 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371416138567 0.391690518653 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10216742915 0.123202303941 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0645416869074 0.077325440228 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.496652970044 0.547984918172 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.131397129336 0.149214159877 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113938326602 0.161403998019 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109050484024 0.0892212321368 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.275209172473 0.385218514788 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0841585114444 0.0692045440612 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236998175641 0.275328986314 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136898417779 0.0653680567796 209% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.5995575221 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.