Some people believe it is imperative for individuals living in developed nations to reduce their energy consumption and lead a more sustainable lifestyle, given the evidence for global climate change. Others believe that such drastic lifestyle changes are unwarranted, based on the existing evidence for global climate change.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Developed nations is characterized with how well it dwells in economical,social,political and environmental aspects.In increasing modernisation of nations,new technologies are burgeoning to provide more amenity to human beings.On the contratry creating more environemental pollutions and health hazard due to global climate change.Individuals from developed nations are more prone to using more modern method as compared with any other individual who dwells from underdevopled nation.Reduction in people consuming energy and electricity for modern technologies will ultimately reduce the overall balance in nature.
Environments itself keeps all creatures and things in balance.Take a instinct,Green trees produce oxygen by using carbon di oxide,whereas living things uses oxygen giving carbon di oxide.Now a days,due to industrialisation the devastation of trees results into imbalance of environment.Yes,change is part of life and human should grow in every aspects wheter it be physical or technology wise.But bringing more modern methods which takes lots of electricity results into plethora of producing electricity.For example,using a car for just two miles of distance not only produce transformation of fuels into gases but damage health effects of an individual.Thus instead of consuming fuels by a vehicle,one can take opt for bicycle which will benefits individuals health by reducing calories.
Humans produce pollution also affects Geographical climate.For example take recent news of global warming.Increase in carbon di oxide in the nature is creating holes in ozone layer.Now this does not bring evidence to the fact that it is only due to individuals of developed nation,but as compared developed nation has large accessible to modern methods.Ofcourse humans achieve success at some period of time but sometimes human considers materialistic things as there success.Instead if every such human is made aware that materialistic thing consumes lot of electricity and it hampers the demand and finally effects environment,they will start adapting sustaiable lifestyle.If every such individuals are made cognizant about using materialistic things only when needed,demands will gradually fall down and so do will not affect environment.
Thus if every individual learned to make difference between need and want,Supply for mateialistic things will decline and every human wheter it be from developed ,underdeveloped or developing nation will stay pollution free and sustainable life.This will ofcourse take a long span of time,but starting from individual it will surely change.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'whereas', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.300492610837 0.240241500013 125% => OK
Verbs: 0.179802955665 0.157235817809 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.12315270936 0.0880659088768 140% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0443349753695 0.0497285424764 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0197044334975 0.0444667217837 44% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12315270936 0.12292977631 100% => OK
Participles: 0.064039408867 0.0406280797675 158% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.75152579127 2.79330140395 134% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0221674876847 0.030933414821 72% => OK
Particles: 0.00246305418719 0.0016655270985 148% => OK
Determiners: 0.051724137931 0.0997080785238 52% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0270935960591 0.0249443105267 109% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.012315270936 0.0148568991511 83% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2593.0 2732.02544248 95% => OK
No of words: 373.0 452.878318584 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.95174262735 6.0361032391 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.458445040214 0.366273622748 125% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.343163538874 0.280924506359 122% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.265415549598 0.200843997647 132% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.217158176944 0.132149295362 164% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.75152579127 2.79330140395 134% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 219.290929204 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592493297587 0.48968727796 121% => OK
Word variations: 69.9118097321 55.4138127331 126% => OK
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6194690265 19% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 93.25 23.380412469 399% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 196.052767132 59.4972553346 330% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 648.25 141.124799967 459% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 93.25 23.380412469 399% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.25 0.674092028746 334% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 5.21349557522 806% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 127.566353887 51.4728631049 248% => OK
Elegance: 2.0 1.64882698954 121% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27563572675 0.391690518653 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.235556159104 0.123202303941 191% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0434344872959 0.077325440228 56% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.547984918172 182% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 6.08094194449e-16 0.149214159877 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18190052852 0.161403998019 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830235708478 0.0892212321368 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.260406403385 0.385218514788 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0520124697195 0.0692045440612 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18190052852 0.275328986314 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830235708478 0.0653680567796 127% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.4325221239 29% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 7.22455752212 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 4.0 13.5995575221 29% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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