To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
A society is compound of major cities and other cities. Each city own its special characteristics. In order to best understand the most important characteristics of a society, one should study different kinds of cities completely.
Undoubtedly, major cities are the center of economy, culture, transportation and art. They influence those fields of other cities and usually control the development of the whole society. For example, New York is such a city, which gives us enormous information about America. First of all, it has to say that New York is a prosperous city and its commercial activities are relevant to the overall country. Furthermore, it's also a city with a number of minorities, which come from all over the world. Black people, Chinese, Indian, Jews and so on, come together, forming the diverse culture of today's America. In addition, another indispensable factor is the historical ancient buildings and museums. New York once had acted as the main battlefield of Revolution and therefore it has historical significance. Also, the statue of Liberty in New York, a gift from France, not only witness the independence of America, but also represent the friendly relationship between France and America. Anyway, major cities, such as New York, are indispensable for the understanding of a society's characteristics.
However, depending on major cities alone cannot help us to fully know the features of a society. The small town and village also have their own particular features, which may be different from the major cities. On the one hand, the situation of economy and transportation in major cities cannot stand for the current situation of all the cities. As we all know, in most countries, there are big gaps between rich and poor areas' economy. Large skyscraper, busy street and convenient transportation, which are generally found in big cities, rarely exist in small town and village. On the other hand, owing to the distinction of place and experience, different cities have formed various characteristics. One of the most obvious cases is the eating habit. In China, the southerner prefer rice and the northerner prefer food made from flour. The people living in the grassland generally eat more beef or mutton, While in the area close to the sea, people are inclined to eat more seafood.
Moreover, the small town and village seems to better conserve conventional culture. As the globalization of economy, people in different countries have more communications and most of the major cities have an enormous number of inhabitants from other countries. Those people are accustomed to distinct life habits in new environments and, at the same time, they also affect the environment where they are living. Thus it has to say that the major cities are similar in many ways.
To sum up, all the districts in major cities and the small town in countryside provide useful information for us. Thus, only by study those areas respectively can we get comprehensive knowledge and best understand the most important characteristics.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...nt to the overall country. Furthermore, its also a city with a number of minorities...
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Line 5, column 423, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'areas'' or 'area's'?
Suggestion: areas'; area's
...here are big gaps between rich and poor areas economy. Large skyscraper, busy street ...
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Line 7, column 414, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... the environment where they are living. Thus it has to say that the major cities are...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'anyway', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'in addition', 'such as', 'first of all', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.261946902655 0.240241500013 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.115044247788 0.157235817809 73% => OK
Adjectives: 0.116814159292 0.0880659088768 133% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0566371681416 0.0497285424764 114% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0265486725664 0.0444667217837 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111504424779 0.12292977631 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0194690265487 0.0406280797675 48% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.03234542112 2.79330140395 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0194690265487 0.030933414821 63% => OK
Particles: 0.00176991150442 0.0016655270985 106% => OK
Determiners: 0.0991150442478 0.0997080785238 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00884955752212 0.0249443105267 35% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00884955752212 0.0148568991511 60% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3062.0 2732.02544248 112% => OK
No of words: 494.0 452.878318584 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.1983805668 6.0361032391 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.58838876751 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.352226720648 0.366273622748 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271255060729 0.280924506359 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.204453441296 0.200843997647 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.145748987854 0.132149295362 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03234542112 2.79330140395 109% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 219.290929204 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51012145749 0.48968727796 104% => OK
Word variations: 60.2030974484 55.4138127331 109% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6194690265 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.6428571429 23.380412469 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9776336998 59.4972553346 57% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.357142857 141.124799967 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 23.380412469 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.674092028746 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 44.7683632157 51.4728631049 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.98214285714 1.64882698954 120% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428783662964 0.391690518653 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0873663454675 0.123202303941 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0469364078141 0.077325440228 61% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.496133057273 0.547984918172 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.126463436917 0.149214159877 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159977098408 0.161403998019 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108918278873 0.0892212321368 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.453386708579 0.385218514788 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.116682868888 0.0692045440612 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.340623672168 0.275328986314 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137448256485 0.0653680567796 210% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88274336283 287% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 10.0 2.70907079646 369% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.5995575221 162% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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