To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Cultures are not only represented by people but by their surroundings and their stimulations too. If one must put oneself upon the task of exploring varied cultures, one only needs go as far as imploring himself to study the major cities. I tend to partially agree with the statement- regardless there are a handful of reasons I would tend to present other views.
For a city to be a major city- influential, rich with resources and opportunities, it has to be pre-established before the time of its dawn with the most efficient planning that can benefit it in the long run. When such a city booms, it often takes upon the role of a leading model. It provides more opportunities, more areas to explore for innovations, equal rights and comfortable environments suitable to growths of any and all kinds of endeavors. When one takes into account this certain city, one can study all there is about the culture and characteristics of that specific society—let alone, the best of what the society has to offer.
The student sees the city in motion; with all its gears and grunts in clockwork, abstracting and unveiling the prose that builds a society- be it the business aspects, the commercial gains or the residential happiness. The city not only derives itself in a baseless way but provides great insights into the drive of the people residing. Cleanliness, entertainment centers, the local cuisine and the markets- all of them make up what consists of a society. If it’s a rather big city, one might also see people from various races and cultures prancing along, which shows the magnitude of acceptance the society in question has. Furthermore, dwelling in the city and appreciating the local company can give a person great insights into the daily routines of residents. One may discover the hardships, the easy-goings, the adoration and what they’d like to change alike in conversation stemming from their views of the city.
On the contrary, metropolitans are only a delegate to what the society has to offer. That is, only the workaholics, the innovators and the driven people reside here. They often fail to represent a substantial part of the society that believes in less tolling and more relaxed approach to life. The nebulous towns and villages often have a lot to offer- they mostly form the agricultural business, be it dairy or farm products or simply the serene scenery everyone needs once in a while. There is always a yin to a yang, and while the major cities represent a driven, work-oriented lifestyle, the country side represents the escape & blithe households.
Conclusively, one can say that to study any society one definitely needs to study both the major cities and the smaller towns but can often incline towards studying the metropolitans more as that is the part tantamount to represent the best the people there have to offer. It also, at last depends on what the person is looking for? Is he looking for the source of success? Or is he looking for the future of today’s wins?
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'handfuls', 'handsful'?
Suggestion: handfuls; handsful
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Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a baseless way" with adverb for "baseless"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...iness. The city not only derives itself in a baseless way but provides great insights into the dr...
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Line 9, column 189, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...towards studying the metropolitans more as that is the part tantamount to represen...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220869565217 0.240241500013 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.137391304348 0.157235817809 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0817391304348 0.0880659088768 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0539130434783 0.0497285424764 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0434782608696 0.0444667217837 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0973913043478 0.12292977631 79% => OK
Participles: 0.024347826087 0.0406280797675 60% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.88251813674 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0330434782609 0.030933414821 107% => OK
Particles: 0.00173913043478 0.0016655270985 104% => OK
Determiners: 0.137391304348 0.0997080785238 138% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.015652173913 0.0249443105267 63% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0191304347826 0.0148568991511 129% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3035.0 2732.02544248 111% => OK
No of words: 514.0 452.878318584 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9046692607 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.321011673152 0.366273622748 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.249027237354 0.280924506359 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.178988326848 0.200843997647 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11673151751 0.132149295362 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88251813674 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 219.290929204 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515564202335 0.48968727796 105% => OK
Word variations: 61.8848573356 55.4138127331 112% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.3636363636 23.380412469 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2450827918 59.4972553346 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.954545455 141.124799967 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 23.380412469 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 48.266360099 51.4728631049 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.45925925926 1.64882698954 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.494131667573 0.391690518653 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133249188023 0.123202303941 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0892608312588 0.077325440228 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.600139007625 0.547984918172 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.098360648874 0.149214159877 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211433030324 0.161403998019 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794753537908 0.0892212321368 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.483662211683 0.385218514788 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.129207660015 0.0692045440612 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.344391146848 0.275328986314 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560766745869 0.0653680567796 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.4325221239 153% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 7.22455752212 194% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.5995575221 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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