To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In deve

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To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Yes of course, what else is he going to study? Yes, a person must study the major cities and the countryside too, or perhaps a strategic mix of both depending on what types or groups of characteristics he is looking for and expecting, if he is to come to a clear understanding of a society’s forms and features.

If one is interested in breaking down contributors to a nation’s GDP, he would want to study technological and industrial institutions in the city, and agricultural ones in the countryside. Ukraine, for example, accrues about an equal portion of its GDP from the industrial sector as from the agricultural sector, so one cannot afford to ignore one for the other if he wants a clear understanding of the correlation of Ukraine’s GDP with its societal values. More generally, as it is today, technology is at the heart of industry, and both tend to be set in the city; Industrial processes due to affordable transportation, availability and proximity of semi-finished materials, and other logistical considerations integrate better in the city. Food and raw materials needed to power the human capital running said industries, however, originate primarily from the rural areas. As such, neither the urban nor the rural can exist without the other. Therefore, a careful analysis of each is important for a clear understanding of the characteristics of a society.

Moreover, as the industrial revolution intertwined with the proliferation of cities, and farms and small vegetable gardens in the countryside spearheaded the cultural transition from a hunter-gatherer lifestyle to a stationary, domesticated existence, we cannot study a society’s historical character without evaluating both the cities and the villages. Since the discoveries of the Americas, countries in South America have existed primarily on agriculture, whereas countries in North America and Western Europe developed from an agricultural existence to an industrial one. In fact, the agricultural characteristic of South American countries, and even in southern United States, played a major role in the proliferation and persistence of slavery in the Americas, whereas slavery came to a quicker end in northern United States and Western Europe. As a result, we cannot ignore the agricultural characteristic of the some states in favor of the industrial characteristic of others when studying a society’s overall historical trajectory.

As far as politics go, taking the United States as an example, one cannot study and predict how the country will vote in a national presidential election without evaluating geography against a political candidate’s appeal. States in the South, Southeast, and the Midwest tend to favor Republican candidates while those on the coasts generally favor Democratic ones. States in the former category have more isolated rural areas in their topography while states in the latter have population more concentrated in the cities. Furthermore, electoral votes accrued by a candidate towards the presidential election by victory in a state differ on a state-by-state basis. As a result, in gauging the characteristics of U.S. democracy, the countryside cannot be ignored in favor of the urban areas: both must be evaluated. In fact, built into the very constitution of the United States of America are the principles of federalism and states-rights; both of these are geographical and topographical entities.

Finally, for a nation’s artistic culture, one would study terracotta in the countryside and graffiti art in the cities. Terracotta originates from an earlier historical period than does graffiti mural, just as agricultural domestication prefigured urban settlement. If one wanted to understand public perception of art in a society—whether positively or negatively—he would study art schools in the city and in the countryside for their goals and curriculum, street artists in the inner cities for their technique, a mother and daughter knitting fabric in the countryside for their patience, and mischievous urban youth with graffiti for their persistence. Studying one but ignoring the others would create a misrepresentation of that society’s artistic ideals.

A society is a complicated entity: it is always evolving and always adapting, so to dissect it, a person must be skilled, precise, patient, and be ready to change with it. Studying the cities is already a commendable step in understanding its forms; however, this is too rigid an approach. It is better to incorporate elements of both the cities and the countryside for a more fluid representation.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, in fact, of course, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 14.8657303371 222% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 103.0 58.6224719101 176% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3923.0 2235.4752809 175% => OK
No of words: 716.0 442.535393258 162% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47905027933 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.17283059074 4.55969084622 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49166787677 2.79657885939 125% => OK
Unique words: 339.0 215.323595506 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473463687151 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 1270.8 704.065955056 180% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.3456128083 60.3974514979 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.92 118.986275619 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.64 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.24 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145127777658 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439690923169 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404485674457 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820754140386 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257026419911 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 14.1392134831 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 48.8420337079 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 198.0 100.480337079 197% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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