There are many aspects socialists take into consideration when considering and investigating main characteristics of a society. The statement claims that major cities is of vital importance for these studies, while I assert that there is no certain prototype can be followed in social studies. That is to say, one should consider the real circumstances of a society before choosing where to start for further and deeper studies. Major cities can be a critical aspect, but sometimes, rustic areas is also unavoidable.
Obviously, the statement assumes that major cities is one of the most irreplaceable part for a modern society. For a socialist who want to know about American society and culture, for instance, visiting major cities in the US will undoubtly help him a lot. The economic conditions, political environemnt and people's lifestyle in big cities like New York vividly reflect the main features of a typical American society.
The assumption may sound appearing, is however, not complete. If a socialist merely focus on big cities, he will not be able to get a whole picture of the society. Big cities do reflect many major aspects of a certian society, but it is not enough. Because for a society, every part matters. Distant rural areas may seem unimportant, but actually, it is one unignorable part, and sometimes it is the difference between different areas provides more insights into a society. For example, only after visiting both the metropolitans and a indigent countryside in the US, one can get a bigger picture of the nation, and have a glimpse on the inbalance exists. This is quite important for anyone who wants to know a society well.
Additionally, sometimes it is even impossible to investigate the major cities when it comes to some special social groups. For instance, when considering the main folk characteristics of a minority ethnic group in China, it is undeniable that city is not enough for deep interogation. Living in rural areas, these people have their own culture and social customs, including their own costumes, special food style, and even own language. They still maintain their traditional lifestyles to some extent, which is not presented in any major cities in China. Thus, to understand their society, one have to go to their own area, instead Beijing or Guangzhou.
For the aforementioned evidence, although cities are important for a social and is becoming more and more influential, when considering social studies, exploring major cities is not enough. Only after knowing as many perspectives as possible of a society, can we understand the society fully and subjectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 535, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ter visiting both the metropolitans and a indigent countryside in the US, one can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, so, still, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2213.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 428.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17056074766 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97788142032 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509345794393 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 723.6 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6483174841 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.380952381 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.380952381 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2380952381 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159562765638 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053678228267 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353086736846 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096037527784 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0105850564614 0.0667264976115 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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