Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
University is major role in students life, it provides knowledge and passion for students which help to build the society. University changes the student life to become a better person with better knowledge and moral. University is one step ahead for student success, if students uses the education provided by university in appropriate way.
If we consider our present world or generation everyone like to create new and do something original, for that university education is not sufficient and for that they require extra course which may be not included in their field. For example a biology student gets education all about medicine and living tissue from the university if he wants to develop something about his learning into software then he should be aware of technical knowledge also which is not provided by the university for hid field. Therefore university should allow other course outside his field of study.
Sometimes students are unable to decide their passion or their interest of field, based on parents decision they selected their course in the university. Apparently after a year in university they might find their field of interest which will be completely different from the course which they chosen before. If they want to change the course completely they have ti go through lot of procedure instead if university provide different course apart from their field of study it helps students to learn and grow which they fascinated on.
In conclusion, university should provide other course which are different from the students field. Which helps students to grow and try different fields and have knowledge about everything which will be useful in current generation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...person with better knowledge and moral. University is one step ahead for student success, ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 507, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ovided by the university for hid field. Therefore university should allow other course ou...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, if, may, so, then, therefore, apart from, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 273.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25641025641 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59283224534 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512820512821 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9825879498 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.454545455 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 5.21951772744 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299946120841 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151265451446 0.0831039109588 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473103887724 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210445858022 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402607438387 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 100.480337079 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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