The well being of the society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Many countries is the world follow democracy where society elects the government. Can a society progress if the citizens are reluctant to question its authority? Its commonly said, “Society suffers not because of action of bad peoples but because of the science of good people.” Many a times the government fall apart due to peoples silence in order to questioning the authority of their misdeeds.
The well-being of a society can be judged by its dedication and commitment to justice, liberty and freedom. Without constant critiques and examination from its people, a society can easily become imbalanced and hostage to unjust values. Therefore it is ever so pertinent for people to constantly access the authority to enhance the well-being of society. Being an alert citizen will always help to streamline atleast few processes in country. Authorities must also be questioned as they should prove their legitimacy to the people.
In many ways, a society has a contract with the individuals of that society to protect them and let them flourish with the freedom to pursue happiness. Inevitably, when authority fails to provide adequately and sometimes even oppress its people then people must question. For eg. Every citizen has “Right to Information” of certain things in society. Here, they can go in the governing office and fill the form and get the information, This also helps society as they become aware of the things going on with the authority. Authority and responsibility are two sides of same coin. Thought they appear to be different but are an integral part of the each other. So, the person who is given an authority has to be responsible as they are representing the nation. For example: There are six civil rights in India like Right to Equality, freedom ,right against exploitation, cultural and educational rights, Right to constitutional remedies. Here, people have right to questions the authority if they observe any misdeed or discrimination on grounds of religion, race, caste, sex, origin of birth etc.
Although questioning the authority is necessary it does not mean that people should always interfere is all the matters. As there are some matters where public interference cant be allowed. And also some decisions are necessary for the betterment of society in such cases authorities are not answerable to public. As more interference and also delay in fast processes.
I do agree that, well being of society is enhanced when people question the authority. The questioning should help the authority and should not be a hindrance. Public should be aware, alert and actively participate in national beneficiary activities. And should avoid being an obstacle. As they should also be aware of their duties along with the right to question. The questioning should improve the system and bring better prospect for the society.
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...bring better prospect for the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2434.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 463.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25701943844 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93430789967 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522678185745 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 767.7 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1126526616 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1481481481 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1481481481 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425630879109 0.243740707755 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111164168804 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122656906324 0.0758088955206 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242526443616 0.150359130593 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084511625761 0.0667264976115 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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