When humans started living in clusters, there was a need to address the needs of the people without encroaching of the rights of others. Hence, came in the idea of governing. The government changed in forms over the time, from heads of small tribal units to rulers to elected democracies. But, the underlying motive of forming any governing body was the same; well-being of society. To ensure the same, the entire society must participate and be watchful of the governing body by constant questioning and demanding for reforms.
Since the reason for any government body is welfare of the people, it is the people that should be in charge of who governs them. Therefore, the slogan for democracies is: of the people, by the people, for the people. Hence, it is the basic right of the people in any country to choose who will lead them. But, with every right, there comes a duty. It is the duty of the same people to question the authority chosen for all steps they take. For a better governing body, all people should participate, either directly or indirectly.
Power has the tendency to corrupt people. When Hitler was chosen by the Germans to govern them, he became the only person governing them. He abolished the system of government and no one questioned him for his ways. Although, in his example, he had a lot of supporters, yet the people who were against him ignored his policies long enough to let him concentrate that much power in his hands, that he would crush everyone who questioned him for years to come. This led to him forming policies that were against the welfare and interest of the masses.
Concentration of power in the hands of a few leads to monarchy, corruption and serving biased interests. To avoid the same, people should stay vigilant, and active in all policies that are made. They should be aware of the activities of the authority and should question the same when they feel cheated or confused. Wrong policies should be immediately reformed. In cases where the authority becomes monarchy, people should revolt the same people they chose.
Everyone is responsible for themselves. Hence, even after electing the people to govern them, it is still the responsibility of the people to ensure that the authority is doing what they are made for. Only vigilant people make a better country.
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.211111111111 0.240241500013 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.173333333333 0.157235817809 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0533333333333 0.0880659088768 61% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0244444444444 0.0497285424764 49% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0622222222222 0.0444667217837 140% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.124444444444 0.12292977631 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0466666666667 0.0406280797675 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.56834396571 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0333333333333 0.030933414821 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.126666666667 0.0997080785238 127% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0222222222222 0.0249443105267 89% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0266666666667 0.0148568991511 179% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2325.0 2732.02544248 85% => OK
No of words: 399.0 452.878318584 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82706766917 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355889724311 0.366273622748 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.22305764411 0.280924506359 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.155388471178 0.200843997647 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.107769423559 0.132149295362 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56834396571 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 219.290929204 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483709273183 0.48968727796 99% => OK
Word variations: 52.3234067723 55.4138127331 94% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6194690265 116% => OK
Sentence length: 16.625 23.380412469 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6370798316 59.4972553346 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.875 141.124799967 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 23.380412469 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.25 0.674092028746 37% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.21349557522 0% => OK
Readability: 38.930764411 51.4728631049 76% => OK
Elegance: 1.47008547009 1.64882698954 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.48390519294 0.391690518653 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.14479227401 0.123202303941 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0963594990265 0.077325440228 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.559540273903 0.547984918172 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.192983361444 0.149214159877 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204163278482 0.161403998019 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106570214455 0.0892212321368 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.397890586355 0.385218514788 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.096344016089 0.0692045440612 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.346219731899 0.275328986314 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642073471244 0.0653680567796 98% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88274336283 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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