Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
How can young people pursue with successes in their profession life or research work? In my humble view, it is true that establishing a long-term realistic goal would contribute them for greater success. However, this doesn't mean that immediate fame and recognition play little functionality during this procedure. Furthermore, it is also worth to point out that both of them are not mutually exclusive to guarantee the youth to grasp with great accomplishment.
To start off, if we want to inspire young people's ambition and guide them for greater achievements, we should encourage them to pursue with long-term target, since such goal could help them build up solid foundation for their future successes. Either in academic research or among business world, long-term ambition always work better in regards to their further success. First, in academic research, by leveraging ambitious goal for relative long time, we can build up solid foundation for reaching such goal. Because research works requires our deep insights for target domain and comprehensive knowledge for further exploration, which requires long time accumulation based on long-term direction. Additionally, even in business world, the glory of "Roma" in business couldn't be established in a day. That is to say, it is through accumulation for both resources and practical experience that one could grasp precious opportunities to gain tremendous profit for enterprise. However, all of this requires a long-term goal's guide, which force us to persist with original goal even confronted with challenges. In this light, long-term goals serves as guiding star for accomplishment of the youth.
However, instead of keeping a skeptics even negative attitude to immediate fame and recognition, I have to contend that those short-term success is also indispensable, since they could facilitate to build up courage and momentum in the process of seeking long-term goals. To understand this point, we should pore over characteristics of human being and how we can make progress in practice. With regards to characteristics of human, it is undoubted that people require occasional confirmation for their behaviors or motivation. Otherwise, without positive affirmation, they, especially without sufficient stamina one, could fail to continue with original goal. In this sense, immediate recognition works as an effective motivator in this process, which could give them continual impetus and avoid them to jettison easily. Moreover, we often face with such dilemma, in which we don't know how far or how long we can reach the ultimate despite with indefatigable efforts. By harnessing goals which could be implemented in short time period, it is better for us to measure our progress and further adjust our schedule. All of those seemingly my myopic goals of no doubt guarantee us on the well track to the long-term purpose.
Furthermore, what I find the most problematic is that the author blindly consider those factors as contradictory pairs and drive us to make a yes-no choice. However, such assumption is tenuous and doesn't always hold true. As discussed before, we can't reach long-term purpose within a stride, therefore it is necessary to meticulously choose a series of immediate targets and schedule them logically. And by realizing such piecemeal target one after another, we can possess confidence and ability to approach our long-term vision and ultimately achieve it. In turn, to avoid indulgence with myopic recognition, the long-term realistic goals shouldn't be lost, since only implementing immediate goals might squander our talents in diverse fields and fail to accumulate our real strength for long-term success. Take study for Reinforcement Learning as an example. Despite the amazing goal to master such complex topic in artificial intelligence, the youth should have specific plans beside this overall goal. For instance, it is necessary to decouple such target into pieces of subtasks, such as theoretical learning, practical exercise, and research work, etc. Among those subtasks, the youth might consider taking some competitions to verify their skills and knowledges, which, if well organized, could inevitably contribute to their deep insights of learning. In this case, fames and recognition in competitions well serve for our long-term goals and long-term goals in turn guide how we choose the subtask in a more reasonable way.
In summary, it is beneficial for us to make determination for farsighted goals, given the long journey to the ultimate success. However, as discussed before, it is evident that resorting to immediate feedback from achievement of piecemeal short-term goal could guarantee us to reach our final end. This is to say, long-term goal and short-term targets doesn't form a irreconcilable dichotomy: we can cultivate our ambition in the long run while utilizing short-term steps to gradually reach it.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...them for greater success. However, this doesnt mean that immediate fame and recognitio...
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Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
..., long-term ambition always work better in regards to their further success. First, in academ...
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Line 3, column 781, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...e glory of 'Roma' in business couldnt be established in a day. That is to say...
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Line 3, column 829, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be established in a day. That is to say, it is through accumulation for both reso...
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Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a skeptic' or simply 'skeptics'?
Suggestion: a skeptic; skeptics
...e youth. However, instead of keeping a skeptics even negative attitude to immediate fam...
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Line 5, column 878, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ten face with such dilemma, in which we dont know how far or how long we can reach t...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...However, such assumption is tenuous and doesnt always hold true. As discussed before, ...
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Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ways hold true. As discussed before, we cant reach long-term purpose within a stride...
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Line 7, column 641, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...ognition, the long-term realistic goals shouldnt be lost, since only implementing immedi...
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Line 7, column 1533, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e the subtask in a more reasonable way. In summary, it is beneficial for us to m...
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Line 9, column 353, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
..., long-term goal and short-term targets doesnt form a irreconcilable dichotomy: we can...
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Line 9, column 365, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...goal and short-term targets doesnt form a irreconcilable dichotomy: we can cultiv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in short, in summary, no doubt, such as, it is true, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 80.0 33.0505617978 242% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 111.0 58.6224719101 189% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4170.0 2235.4752809 187% => OK
No of words: 765.0 442.535393258 173% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45098039216 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.25914758986 4.55969084622 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00527282361 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 367.0 215.323595506 170% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479738562092 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 1259.1 704.065955056 179% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 6.24550561798 288% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 4.38483146067 502% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9472467996 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.363636364 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93939393939 5.21951772744 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 10.2758426966 234% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268281001983 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763739909658 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477144885793 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175169697251 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030106105911 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 197.0 100.480337079 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...them for greater success. However, this doesnt mean that immediate fame and recognitio...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
..., long-term ambition always work better in regards to their further success. First, in academ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 781, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...e glory of 'Roma' in business couldnt be established in a day. That is to say...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 829, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be established in a day. That is to say, it is through accumulation for both reso...
^^
Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a skeptic' or simply 'skeptics'?
Suggestion: a skeptic; skeptics
...e youth. However, instead of keeping a skeptics even negative attitude to immediate fam...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 878, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ten face with such dilemma, in which we dont know how far or how long we can reach t...
^^^^
Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...However, such assumption is tenuous and doesnt always hold true. As discussed before, ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ways hold true. As discussed before, we cant reach long-term purpose within a stride...
^^^^
Line 7, column 641, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...ognition, the long-term realistic goals shouldnt be lost, since only implementing immedi...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1533, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e the subtask in a more reasonable way. In summary, it is beneficial for us to m...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 353, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
..., long-term goal and short-term targets doesnt form a irreconcilable dichotomy: we can...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 365, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...goal and short-term targets doesnt form a irreconcilable dichotomy: we can cultiv...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in short, in summary, no doubt, such as, it is true, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 80.0 33.0505617978 242% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 111.0 58.6224719101 189% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4170.0 2235.4752809 187% => OK
No of words: 765.0 442.535393258 173% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45098039216 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.25914758986 4.55969084622 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00527282361 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 367.0 215.323595506 170% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479738562092 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 1259.1 704.065955056 179% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 6.24550561798 288% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 4.38483146067 502% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9472467996 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.363636364 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93939393939 5.21951772744 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 10.2758426966 234% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268281001983 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763739909658 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477144885793 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175169697251 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030106105911 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 197.0 100.480337079 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.