Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition.
Orientation of youths toward the pursuing long-term, realistic goals is the chief goal of the nurture. In realizing the respective goal, the statement tacitly recommends that youths should be discouraged to pursue the immediate fame or recognition. I believe that immediate fame and aiming for long-term realistic goals are not necessarily mutually exclusive.
To begin with, immediate fame and recognition, can tempt the individuals not to follow longer and more prestigious aims. Even, lust of fame and recognition can manipulate young people into taking the illegal and immoral shortcuts to ga...
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