2 weeks ago you bought a radio from a local branch of a well known chain of shops. It did not work properly. The shop took it back and said they would repair it. You have waited a week and still it is not ready.Write a letter to the shop complaining. Tell

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2 weeks ago you bought a radio from a local branch of a well known chain of shops. It did not work properly. The shop took it back and said they would repair it. You have waited a week and still it is not ready.

Write a letter to the shop complaining. Tell what has happened and how you feel. Ask them to repair the radio very soon or supply you with a new radio.

Dear Sir,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction related to a radio that I bought from your store. I purchased it from Bestbuy two weeks ago. It worked fine for a couple of days, and on third day one of the buttons started coming off.

I took the radio back to store for return or exchange, however; the store manager said that we would be able to repair it within the couple of days. It’s been a week, and I have not heard anything from the store. I hope you understand how I feel to go through this trouble after buying such an expensive radio, which is not even two weeks old. I exp...

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