According to those in travel business the nature of overage holiday is changing rather than seeking a relaxing break in a far away place, people now want excitement on holidays and are keen to participate in unusual and challenging activities. do you agree and disagree
In this rampant age of globalization, the holidays are fabulous bones for human beings in this busy world.It said that,now a days,people are more crazy to do unusual and challenging activities for get more enjoy and lot of fun.By contrast, others have conflicting views. Here i would like to incline in the favor of statement.
To set in, there are ample point to support my views. First and foremost, in these days, people watch lot of movies and reality shows are based on action, stunts and many more. As a result, they want to imitate actions and stunts of their favourite heroes and actors thus, they do unusual and challenging activities during the holidays. further more, people have desire to achieve many records in their life to earn name and fame so,they want to do thrilling activities in their real life
Further emphasizing on my point of views. initially, today a large number of sports events such as wwe,bike and car racing,boxing and many more to stimulate the interst of people to do these activities in their life. what a more, technology has made it easy to do challenging activities becouse it furnishes safety to do action and stunts so, people do not have fear to do these activities.
Conversely, some proportion of masses claim that, the unusual and challenging activities are very dangerous for their life becouse in this activities they can lose their life.so every one does not do these activities. In addition, people are more busy in their life as they they do not have energy and confidence for adventures activities who do not do challenging and unusual activities during the holidays.
in a nutshell, after doing a great deal of thought and deliberation with myself. I would say that in this essay, we can not support or go against either of the both sides entirely but, still i think that people want to do adventures activities rather than relaxing break in home
Sentence: In this rampant age of globalization, the holidays are fabulous bones for human beings in this busy world.It said that,now a days,people are more crazy to do unusual and challenging activities for get more enjoy and lot of fun.By contrast, others have conflicting views.
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Sentence: Conversely, some proportion of masses claim that, the unusual and challenging activities are very dangerous for their life becouse in this activities they can lose their life.so every one does not do these activities.
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Sentence: In addition, people are more busy in their life as they they do not have energy and confidence for adventures activities who do not do challenging and unusual activities during the holidays.
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