Adult education

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Adult education

Despite of, teenage education is mostly wide in the world, the adult education doesn't fair either. we can see it the help of presented charts.

Adult population have various reasons for study. The most known reason is interest of subject, which occupies 40 percent of the chart. To gain qualifications also has reasonable basis among adults for study with the percent of 38. Although, for adult population job is very important and the extra study will be helpful for their current job, only 22 percent of them think it can be helpful for current job. Adults which want to improve prospects of promotion and enjoy learning are the same rates,20 percent. 12 percent of adults estimates that with getting the second education, they can gain a chance of changing jobs. Only 9 percent need education to meet people in the different way of thinking.

And we know that education, especially the second one is so costly. People think that adult education should be shared as three parts. First part is individual, which contains 40 percent. Employer course is 35 and the taxpayer course is 25 percent.

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