age distribution of the population in Australia in 1961 and 2031
These two bar charts illustrate how the population of Australia has tripled from 1961 up to 2031. The population in 1961 is about 11 million that the main group of age is 0-14 and less one is elderly people.
Whereas the fertility in 1961 is not notable we would have a growth of population in 2031.
In 1961 there is a baby booming that accounts for approximately three millions of total population. The baby boomers’ ages are between 0 up to 14 years old, this amount of population become between 64-84 years old in 2031.
The other age group is adults, which include the ages of 30-50. This group of ages includes the second rate of age distribution in 1961 and the first rank of age distributed in 2031.
The group of elderly distribution accounts for just about 1 million in 1961 in other hand in 2031 it will be become near 4 millions.
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