An ambition is positive or negative Discuss both views

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An ambition is positive or negative? Discuss both views.

Everyone in this word has a dream to become success, and to found it out, people must full carve and ambitious. Ambition is forceful desire to achieve or do something. In some situations, ambition is needed in world of work. I think that ambition is a desirability force towards success although ambition has a negative side. In this essay, I will review that we should not be scared of ambition because ambition is important in life.

Benefits of having an ambition are comprehend that we can make our lives better and we have abilities. Ambition is a good when your goals are for kindness of other people. It is good to be ambitious as long as you know the difference between what is wrong and right. An ambition can make people to work hard and achieve the dream. For instance, people who have an ambition for becoming a lecture will work hard to fulfill it. And they usually have a high spirit and enthusiasm to get what they want. People who have a dream to be something that will do whatever they can to get it.

Ambition is often connected with negative characteristics such as greed, intolerance, power and so forth. People get carried away and tend to hurt the people around them just so they can achieve that goal. For instance, to get power and money, people will do anything even neglect the needs of other people and the reward that they get is loneliness. To obtain the desired, they could do anything with the various ways despite having to harm or hurt others. For example, people who have a desire to earn a lot of money, but to they get it by way stole or robbed of another person. This is the negative effect of a person who has the ambition.

Finally, Ambition is often seen negatively. But without ambition, their life becomes empty and meaningless. And than we should not be over ambitious, because ambition will be negative if the excess and will be positive if we could arrange it. So, someone who have ambition of positive side can become succesful.

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Ambition is forceful desire
Ambition is a forceful desire

Sentence: Everyone in this word has a dream to become success, and to found it out, people must full carve and ambitious.
Description: The word found is not usually used as a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
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Sentence: For example, people who have a desire to earn a lot of money, but to they get it by way stole or robbed of another person.
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Sentence: So, someone who have ambition of positive side can become succesful.
Error: succesful Suggestion: successful

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