The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year.
The bar chart shows the estimated number of jeans that will be sold next year in Turkey while the pie chart shows the projected market share of two well-known jeans companies at the twelfth month next year.
According to the bar chart, Jack & jones Co will be succeeded to sell more pairs jeans than Mango Co during a year period except July and August. In January, jeans from Jack & Jones Co will be sold about 450 thousand of pairs while Mango Co is predicted to just can sell 300 thousand fewer than Jack & Jones Co. However, in february, there will be decreased about half of january’s total ...
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