Barron's IELTS Practice Book 2010 Academic Practice Test6. The graphs below show unemployment rates and average earnning according to level of education.

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Barron's IELTS Practice Book 2010 Academic Practice Test6. The graphs below show unemployment rates and average earnning according to level of education.

The bar charts provide clear information about the percentage of unemployment and average salary by Educational Level in 2008. The percentage of unemployment and the sum of earnning are on the horizontal axes at the first and second graphs respectively. The main trend is that the percentage of High School Diploma was approximately 5.5%, however Graduate Degree has the biggest earnning about $ 1.500.

Only 1.2% of people, who have Graduate Degree, were unemployment. It is the least from all and their salaries were the biggest respectively. Employees with High School Diploma earned only $600 weekly. Also, it should be noted that the percentage of unemployees, who have College Degree, were just under 2.5%. And the average salary is about $1.100. Moreover, there were about 4.2% of people, who have Some College. And average earning was about $675.

In conclusion, it should be noted that people, who have only High School Diploma, can not find a job. So, there were approximately 5.5% those. And their earning is less than others.

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