The chars below show the percentage of monthly household income spent on various items by two different groups in one European country

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The chars below show the percentage of monthly household income spent on various items by two different groups in one European country.

The pie charts compare the percentage of household income spent on different items for two different groups in one European country. In general, it is clear from the data given that food and drink has highest percentage in comparison with the other items in low income group with 29% while the proportion of this item for high income group is almost 15 percent.

Fuel bills have second highest percentage for the group who has low income with 24 percent while this percentage for the group who has high income is only 7 percent. More over, the total percentage of clothing, restaurant and transpor...

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