The chart below show the amountof leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shows below.
The chart below show how many hours of free time enjoyed men and women of several employment status.
Employed men with full-time job have more time to spend their time at 50 hours for a week. In contrast employed women have less time about 30 an hours to spend leisure time maybe it is because they must take care their children. Also employed part-time women enjoy their free time just forty hours for a week, and there is no figure of men to spend free time.
On the other hand, unemployed and retired inhabitants have the highest time to enjoy their free time. Eighty hours for unemployed and retired figures of men and seventy hours female used to enjoy their time. This situation people who spend their time between unemployed and retired are similar at 80 hours and 70 hours.
Fifty hours for weeks housewives enjoyed their time and there is no figure of househusband. This condition maybe there is no male to become househusband.
In conclusion unemployed and retired are the most highest to spend their leisure time. However there is no figure employed part-time male and househusband, so we did not know about the amount of free time they spend their time.
The chart below show how many hours of free time enjoyed men and women of several employment status.
The chart below shows how many hours of free time are enjoyed by men and women in several employment status.
Sentence: Fifty hours for weeks housewives enjoyed their time and there is no figure of househusband.
Suggestion: Can you re-write this sentence?
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 204 200
No. of Characters: 945 1000
No. of Different Words: 94 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.779 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.632 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.272 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 48 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 39 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.545 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.619 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.455 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.528 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.7 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.276 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4