The chart below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Based on the bar charts, they give information about the number of bee colonies and the amount of honey production in the United of America every ten years ago during 1970 until 2010.

In 1970, US honey-bee colonies had the number of 4,000,000 and produced 130,000 ton honey by companies in US. After the next ten years, US honey-bee colonies were increased approximately 0.25 million in 1980. But, in the same time 20,000 million US honey production had decreased with significant from 130,000 to 110,000 million.

During 1980-1990, the US honey-bee colonies were fell around 0.75 million but went up to 10,000 ton US honey produced. From 1990 to 2010, continually US honey-bee colonies and US honey production had dropped. It’s around one million US honey-bee colonies and 20,000 until 30,000 US honey production had dropped.

Overall, the bar charts show that from 1970 to 2010 US honey-bee colonies and US honey production had decreased continually. Also, only once for 30 years went up to 10,000 ton US honey produced between 1970 until 2010. The number of colonies decreased more and more, and the amount honey production fell too. From the bar charts obviously amount of honey-bee production depends on the honey-bee colonies.

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