The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.

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The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.

The chart below lets us compare the amount spent on six different consumer goods, to be more precise, personal stereos, tennis racquets, perfumes, CD's, toys and photographic films in four European countries.

It is clearly visible from the table that Britain has always significantly differed from other countries for the amount spent on given consumer goods. Meanwhile, in France most consumers prefer to spent their money on photographic films, than other goods indicated on the given information.

The amount spent on toys in Italy and France are equal, but in most cases the indicators of Italy are bigger than France, except on photographic films and CDs. Refer to chart, it is evident that in Germany people do not show great interest to consume such goods as consumers of other European countries.

The major conclusion that can be drawn using this graph is that there are great differencies among the choices of residents in given countries.

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