The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.
Given is the chart providing information about the quantity of money spent on 6 various types of goods in 4 developed countries of Europe. It is clearly seen that, photographic films are the most popular one among the given goods.
A glance at the chart reveals that, Britain ranked the first in all cases and especially in terms of purchasing photographic films and CD’s was marginally ahead of France. When it comes to consuming personal stereos, tennis racquets, and perfumes both countries showed the similar pattern, to be more precise, in all cases Britain lead with spending great amount ...
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especially in terms of purchasing photographic films and CD’s was marginally ahead of France.
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Britain lead with spending great amount of money
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