The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in millions) of telephone calls in Finland, divided into three categories, from 1995 – 2004.
 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in millions) of telephone calls in Finland, divided into three categories, from 1995 – 2004.
 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates amount of telephone calls in minuets in the United Kingdom between 1995 and 2002.

Generally speaking, people in the UK spent about 70 billion minuets with local-fixed line compared to just under 40 billion and about 3 billion minuets for National and International fixed line and mobiles respectively. The total number of minuets of both mobiles and National and International fixed line increased noticeably in that period.

However, the total number of minuets of local fixed line rose untill 1999 at which point it declined till the end of the period, at approximately 72 billion in 2002.

In brief, residents in the UK used to spend their time more on average on fixed lines. And the gap between three categories had narrowed during the second half of the period.

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