Essay topics:
the charts
The bar charts illustrates number of marriage and divorce rates and marital status of adult in USA from 1970 to 2000.
in 1970 until 1980, number of marriages was constant in 2,5 million, but it steady decreased in 1990 and 2000. On the other hand, number of divorces was increased during 1970-1980, from 1 million to 1,4 million. in 1990 number of devorces went down about 0,2 million and became 1 million in 2000.
At the same time, the highest number of adult getting married in 1970, stood in 70% then declined in 2000. However, divorced and never married among adult Americans rose from 1970 to 2000, and widowed do not decreased in huge number.
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Sentence: However, divorced and never married among adult Americans rose from 1970 to 2000, and widowed do not decreased in huge number.
Description: A verb, past participle is not usually followed by a verb 'to do', uninflected present tense, infinitive or
Suggestion: Refer to widowed and do
Sentence: On the other hand, number of divorces was increased during 1970-1980, from 1 million to 1,4 million. in 1990 number of devorces went down about 0,2 million and became 1 million in 2000.
Error: devorces Suggestion: ?
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