The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.Summarize the following information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.Summarize the following information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts compare the proportion of different age groups in two distinct countries namely Yemen and Italy in the year 2000 and 2050.

Generally speaking, the population of children increases; however, the population of old people reduces in both region.

The proportion of below 59-year-olds declined in the Yemen; on the contrary, over-60-years has had an upsurge in that region, from about 3.6 % to just under 5.7 %. And more than a half of the Italy will be young people in the year 2025.

Having considered the population of Italy, you can deduce that in the year 2000, a half of the population was 15-59 years. Afterwards, it declined by about 17 %. In addition, 0-14 years has a reduction in the second considered period, by approximately 3 %. However, 60-year-old population has a two fold growth.

In brief, both Yemen and Italy has a rise in over-15-year-olds and they has, on the other hand, a reduction in below 15 years.

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