The charts below show information about animals and rainfall at the Nboro Nature Reserve.
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The charts show information about zebras and buffalos as the number of animals, and the amount of annual rainfall at the Nboro Nature Reserve per two years from 2005 to 2011.
Buffalos were fewer than zebras at 40 buffalos and just less 60 zebras in 2005. Zebras and buffalos rose dramatically from 2005 to 2009. However, the number of zebras increased by more than 10 zebras from 2009 to 2011 and also buffalos increased slightly just 5 buffalos.
In 2005, there were just less than 800 millimeters of rain. The amount rose to 1.100 millimeters in 2007, but fell dramatically to 700 millimeters in 2009. The highest rainfall happened in 2011 with approximately 1.200 millimeters.
Overall, the number of both animals is slight increased for six years. the highest rainfall was over six-year period in 2011 with millimeters, and in 2005 the least amount of rain at the Nboro Nature Reserve.
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