The charts below show information about animals and rainfall at the Nboro Nature Reserve.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The barcharts show information about a number of zebras and buffalos and amount of annual rainfall per two years from 2005 to 2011 in Nboro Nature Reserve.
Overall, there was correlation between amount of zebras and total of rainfall whereas zebra’s number increased, if there were much rainfall. However, number of buffalos always increased although the rainfall less.
The population of zebras during the six-year period were fluctuated. In 2005, there were approximately 55 zebras. Two years after that, this rose to around 75 zebras. However, this slightly fell to 70 in 2009. In 2011, the number grew up to over 80 animals. During the same period, the number of buffalos steadily increased. This sharply rose around 30-40 buffalos to over 80 in 2007 and just under 120 in 2009, which slightly lower than 2011.
The rainfall in Nboro Nuter Reserve, the amount of rainfall in 2005 and 2009 were less than in 2007 and 2011. Rainfall per year in 2005 and 2009 were 650 and 700 milimetres while in 2007 and 2011 the amount of rainfall was increased to 1,100 mm and 1,200 mm.
Sentence: The barcharts show information about a number of zebras and buffalos and amount of annual rainfall per two years from 2005 to 2011 in Nboro Nature Reserve.
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Sentence: Rainfall per year in 2005 and 2009 were 650 and 700 milimetres while in 2007 and 2011 the amount of rainfall was increased to 1,100 mm and 1,200 mm.
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